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Title: Forsaking All Others
Characters/Pairings: Kal/Bruce
Rating: PG
Summary: Kal and Bruce prepare to be Nightwing and Flamebird and Bruce teaches Kal something he didn't know about Kryptonian society.  A continuation of the From This Day Forward series.
Word count: 3000
Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] rai_daydreamer 's birthday and as a thank you for all the inspiration.

Kal-El watched his husband working across the room.  Dressed in the elaborate layers of silk and brocade that marked him as the adopted heir of one of the most powerful Families of Krypton, he was a breathtaking sight.  The dark blue jewel tones shot through with silver thread shimmered when he moved and reminded Kal of the grace and beauty hidden underneath them.

He swallowed as a surge of lust stabbed through him and looked back down at his book.  The weeks since their honeymoon ended had been...difficult.  Re-integrating into the El household after a blissful month wallowing in the total perversion of touch, the hedonistic thrill of penetrative sex, had been something of a shock.  Kal would catch Bruce staring at him from across the room and know that Bruce was thinking about stroking Kal's body until he arched with pleasure, tasting and biting and gripping in an orgy of touch.  The new English words Bruce was teaching him would drift into his head unbidden, words like suck and cock, ass and fuck, and it would be all Kal could do to keep from doing something shocking, like reaching out to touch Bruce's shoulder, right there in front of his parents! 

He was truly becoming perverted.

So far he had managed to restrain himself, though their lovemaking in the evenings was sometimes frantic to the point of violence.  Other times it was languid, tender; long strokes of infinitely warm skin, a blissful dream of sensation.  Kal loved all of it.

At the moment, unfortunately, Bruce's body language spoke of frustration.  He was making marks on a piece of paper and toying with two pieces of metal, a Kryptonian alloy that had caught his attention immediately.  His eyes, however, kept drifting to the door.  Finally he put down one of the metal tubes with a sharp clank

"This is no good," he muttered.  "I can't concentrate when I know your parents might come walking in at any time."  He sighed and ran his hands through his hair.  "For a touch-phobic culture, Kryptonians certainly don't have much of a sense of privacy." 

Kal sighed.  This was becoming a definite source of tension between them.  Apparently on Earth when people closed doors--even in full daylight!--it was polite to knock before entering.  Who would have expected a culture with such lax taboos on touching would have such strict boundaries about personal space?  "What are you working on?"

Another glance at the door.  "Anti-grav units.  From your descriptions of the legends, it's clear Nightwing and Flamebird have to be able to fly, somehow.  If I can make us personal anti-grav belts we'll have a huge psychological advantage.  Tactical, too."  He placed the two metal tubes about a hands-breadth from each other;  for a moment they hovered in the air unassisted.

Kal tried to resist the urge to beam at his husband.  Tensions about personal space aside, this partnership was working out very well.  Kal was responsible for researching the nearly limitless fables and myths about the legendary Kryptonian heroes and distilling their most important qualities;  Bruce was responsible for finding some way to make those legends into reality.  "On Earth, you would have had that whole huge mansion to yourself to work in."

Bruce frowned down at the metal.  "I wasn't going to be able to use the Manor.  Too much chance of being discovered."

"You were going to have a secret lair or something?"

"Actually...there were caves under my house.  I was thinking about basing my work out of there."

Excitement rose up in Kal.  "But there's a huge network of caves running right under the compound here!  I used to sneak down there as a boy sometimes."

Bruce's eyebrows lifted.  "Really?"

"I can show you this evening if you'd like."

"I'd like that."  Bruce smiled, as if at a private joke.  "But later in the evening.  I have plans for us for the early parts."

Kal started to ask what, but at that moment his mother came bustling into the room.  Bruce hastily swept the diagrams aside for some fabric swatches, looking somewhat annoyed. 

Lara looked rather annoyed as well.  "Brucie, is it true?"

Bruce looked a little flustered, and Kal wasn't sure it was entirely an act;  the matron of the El household could be an intimidating figure.  "Is what true?"

Lara put her hands on her hips and frowned severely.  "Were you seen in public without gloves?"

Bruce grimaced.  "I forgot.  I turned right around and came back--"

"--But not before Thala Mo-Zor saw you!"  Lara made a tsking noise, then abruptly turned on Kal.  "But really it's you I should be scolding, Kal.  Honestly!  Bruce at least has the excuse of being an alien.  You know perfectly well such indecent exposure will be remarked on."

Kal hung his head.  "I'm sorry, mother."

"Well, see it doesn't happen again, dear."  She cast Kal an indulgent smile, apparently mollified.  "You know we're a very tolerant household--I mean, I even go gloveless now and then in the house!  But that's indoors behavior."

Kal gave Bruce a sheepish glance as Lara swept from the room.  "I'm sorry I didn't remind you to wear the gloves."

Bruce snorted.  "Oh, I know you.  You just subconsciously wanted me to go out in public shamefully bare-handed so you could revel in knowing I was lewdly exposing myself before everyone--"  He broke off.  "Kal, you're blushing!"

"I--maybe I did, a little."  There was no denying the erotic shock he had felt when he had looked down to see Bruce's hands bare, right there on the public street;  to know that at any time Bruce could reach out and put that bare hand to his face, skin to skin, under the sun and sky and in front of everyone...  "Rao, you've got such sexy hands," Kal said, staring at them.  They clenched into fists as he watched and he bit back a moan of desire.  It was so long until sunset, when they'd be safe behind doors again, free to touch and be touched...

"We definitely need to find a secret lair as soon as possible," Bruce said.

: : :

It was useless to sit in the room and lust after each other in vain, so they decided to take the dogs for a run in the park.  Ace, of course, was heeling perfectly, trotting alongside Bruce with an almost regimental precision, muzzle held high and ears lifted. 

Kal was suddenly pulled almost off his feet as Krypto took off after a floating bit of paper.  Bounding wildly over the grass barking, Krypto halted so suddenly Kal almost fell on top of him, then scratched himself amiably and licked Kal's face before charging back at the rather bemused Ace.

"I--uh--sorry," Kal muttered as he tried to disentangle the two dogs without ending up tangled up with Bruce as well.  Even with his hands carefully gloved, Bruce was a tempting sight.  "I never gave him much discipline as a puppy, I guess."

"I think he's charming," Bruce said with a small smile.  "I value enthusiasm.  I find it very...pettable."

"Uh," said Kal.  He was still wondering what to say that didn't involve various filthy words in English when Bruce's smile dropped away as he looked over Kal's shoulder.

Kal turned to see a man walking a huge black mastiff, wearing traditional Kryptonian robes.  Kal recognized him from the wedding photos--Lex Luthor, another of Earth's millionaire-hostages.  "Why, Bruce Wayne," the man said in English as he approached.  "Fancy running into you here."

Bruce nodded politely.  "Lex."

Krypto danced up to the new canine arrival and dropped into "let's play" position, front legs extended.  The mastiff growled.

"It's all right, Prudence," Lex said, stroking her head, and the dog subsided.  Confused, Krypto returned to Kal's side, casting sorrowful glances at the other dog.  "You'll have to forgive Prudence," Lex continued.  "Your creature there may look like the same species, but she can tell he's actually alien."

"Ace seems to have no problem with him," Bruce noted, nodding at the German Shepherd, whose tail thumped gently against Krypto's side at hearing his name.

Lex's voice was silky.  "Some dogs have no sense at all, I suppose."  He nodded politely and moved past them, the mastiff following.

Krypto whined and Ace licked his ear.

"He's going to be a problem," Bruce muttered.  "There's no way he's letting this alliance hold."

"Are humans really that xenophobic?"

Bruce looked at him sideways.  "Not all of us.  But enough."

"But not all of you."

Bruce looked over to where Ace was now rolling in the grass next to Krypto.  "Not all of us."

: : :

The thick evening fog of Kryptonopolis was starting to gather as Kal and Bruce moved through the city streets.  Bruce wouldn't tell him where they were going, just smiled enigmatically.  "Make sure not to wear anything with the El symbol on it," he had said.  The streets were awash with hazy, mist-soaked light as the blazing illuminations of the city came to life, but Bruce turned down a darkened alley and Kal followed him, bewildered.  Bruce paused in front of an unmarked door and tapped at it rhythmically.  A small square opened in the middle of the door and a gloved hand was extended, palm up.  Kal waited for Bruce to place something in it--money, a token--but instead he was startled when Bruce reached out and lightly touched the palm with his own gloved fingers.

At the touch, the hand retreated into darkness and after a moment the door swung open.  "Let's go," said Bruce, moving inside. 

The room they entered was small and empty of people, but masks hung from hooks on the walls in bewildering profusion.  Bruce picked one off the wall--a dark blue half-domino--and put it on with a last meaningful glance at Kal, who followed suit with a deep crimson mask of his own.  Another complicated series of knocks and a new door opened..

Kal followed Bruce into a large room, a bar where various masked couples were sitting and drinking.  The room was fairly well-lit, but silent except for low music from speakers.  Other than the masks, it looked like any ordinary bar at first glance--

And then Kal looked again.

At one end of the bar, two women were sitting, gazing intently at each other.  As Kal looked, one of them reached out and stroked the long cascade of golden tresses, sliding her fingers into the fall of curls slowly, luxuriously, her fingers--bare fingers!--slipping to touch her partner's chin.  The blonde woman arched into the touch, head flung back in pleasure, and Kal's mouth went dry in shock.

Face flaming to match the mask hiding it, he looked around the room.  Most of the other inhabitants of the bar were also watching the two women, silent and intent, masked faces expressionless but body language speaking of total absorption.  As Kal watched, another couple shifted slightly to allow their arms and shoulders to press against each other, and the woman rested her hand on the man's.

For a panicked second, Kal almost bolted from this den of iniquity.  He had never imagined--never even dreamed--that there were places like this, that there were even other Kryptonians who might...enjoy touching each other.  In public.  His mind reeled.  But Bruce was already taking a seat at the bar and Kal forced his feet to move, follow his husband and sit down beside him.

Bruce slid him a drink and took a careful sip of his own.  "Would you like to go home?" he murmured under the music.

Right next to Kal, there were two men sitting side-by-side.  One was touching the other's calf with his foot, lightly but deliberately, and his partner wasn't moving away.  The foot slid up and down the silk-clad leg, up and down--Kal tore his eyes away and saw the man watching him, a small smile curving the mouth under the mask. 

Kal looked back at Bruce and shook his head slightly.

Bruce's smile was even more dizzying.

They just sat near each other for ten or fifteen minutes, nursing their drinks, watching the other couples as they brushed against each other.  Few were as brazen as the blonde and her partner, who were still attracting a lot of attention.  The blonde was tracing her partner's lips lightly with a finger, following the contours of her smile.  It was insane.  It was exhilarating.

Krypton was a whole new world to Kal tonight.

Bruce set down his drink with a deliberate air, then held his hand out in front of him.  As Kal watched, he pulled off his glove--slowly, finger by finger, exposing bare skin bit by bit.  Then the other glove, until both his hands were bare.  Kal stared at them:  the manicured nails, the dusting of hairs on the knuckles, the little brown birthmark just above his wedding ring.  His pulse thundered in his veins, even as he tried to remind himself that he'd seen these hands hundreds of times, they held no secrets for him.  But other people in the bar were looking at those bare hands, and Kal felt like standing up and saying, Look at these hands, these hands that touch my body and bring me pleasure.  Look at how beautiful they are.  Am I not to be envied indeed?

He was still blushing under the mask when Bruce reached out and began, with infinite delicacy, to remove his gloves in turn.

Kal froze with shock for a moment, going tense, and Bruce stopped as well, looking at him, waiting.  Kal took a deep breath and nodded slightly, and Bruce inched the gloves off his hands very slowly.  Once Kal's hands were bare, Bruce carefully twined their fingers together, skin against skin, an interlacing of pure sensuousness.  Kal's breath came short at the touch, every bit of skin tingling.  There were masks turned to face them--most of the bar seemed to be watching them now--but Kal was drowning in bliss, lost in touch.  He flexed his fingers to stroke the back of Bruce's hands.

And then Bruce lifted Kal's hand to his mouth and kissed it, lingeringly.

The room went completely still, but Kal's vision was narrowed to only Bruce's smile around his fingers, his world nothing but Bruce's touch, nothing but the need for more of it.  He pulled Bruce off his bar stool and into a full embrace, pressing his body against him, stroking his hands down his husband's back, feeling the broad shoulderblades beneath the silk.

The Kryptonians had touched each other with a clumsy but earnest deliberateness;  but Bruce was a living flame in his arms, all grace and beauty, completely artless and natural, swaying into his touch and touching in turn.  Kal wrapped his arms around his husband and held on, breathing the scent of his hair, the strange and delicious alien nuances of it.  He felt whole, he felt right.  For a long time they merely held each other, letting their bodies fit together, his hands on Bruce's hips, Bruce's arms twined around his neck.

And then Bruce's lips grazed his neck, his breath hot, and Kal's touch-drunken daze shifted abruptly into something else, something completely imperative and undeniable.  "Time to go," he muttered, standing up, taking Bruce's arm to steer him toward the door as a sigh of mixed approval and disappointment rustled around the room.

They careened out into the alley together, Kal refusing to let go of Bruce, pulling him close.  They stumbled homeward, the fog swirling around them, protecting them from prying eyes as they touched and kissed and walked hand-in-hand, shameless and joyous.

: : :

"Can't we light the lamp?"  Bruce voice grumbled behind him in the pitch-blackness of the cave.

"Not yet," Kal said as they picked their way along.  "Don't worry, the way should be clear.  I used to come here as a kid, I know the way by heart," he said, his voice echoing and resounding off the walls.

"It's definitely big," Bruce said. 

"We're almost to the center of the room," Kal said, skirting a rock.  "I always used to come here in the dark and then just wait for a moment in the darkness before I turned on the lamp."  He stopped and stood still, taking a deep breath;  after a moment Bruce's arms slipped around him and in the perfect, waiting darkness they simply held each other.  "All right," Kal said.  "I'm lighting the lamp.  It's going to be bright for a moment."

He had the lamp set very low because he knew what would happen, but it took his breath away as always when the light first touched the walls of the cave. 

The brilliant crystalline stalagmites caught and reflected and flung the light in a thousand infinite prisms:  sapphire, ruby, emerald, topaz.  Refracted light danced off of the rainbow-hued stones of the walls:  viridian, carnelian, lapis.  Countless colors in endless shades, an explosion of pastel and neon and deep jewel tones cascading around them, endlessly changing.

Kal stared in wonder, caught up in a web of trembling lights, blue and green and gold, orange and pink and violet.  He turned to Bruce to share the moment--and stopped in confusion.

Bruce was laughing.

His shoulders were shaking as he stared around the cave, hand clamped over his mouth in an attempt to muffle his mirth, a look of disbelief in his eyes.  "It's...not exactly what I imagined," he said after a moment, his voice trembling with laughter.

"Is there...is there a problem?"  Kal asked, feeling uneasy.  What were caves like on Terra?

Bruce was looking around the glittering cave, his laughter fading away to a smile that was slightly wry, turned inward.  He met Kal's eyes and the smile warmed. 

"No," Bruce said.  "I think it's perfect for Nightwing and Flamebird."  He looked around the vast cavern again, appraising, nodding slightly.  "Perfect for us."

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Date: 2009-01-09 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffichen.livejournal.com
Ooooh, that was sooo good :D

I was feeling so sorry for our boys with their suppressed desires - poor guys!

But yay for the end :)

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Date: 2009-01-09 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
*grin* I think they almost enjoy the challenge of operating in such a closed society. But yeah, there isn't much chance for public displays at all! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting!

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Date: 2009-01-09 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] genclay.livejournal.com
Lovely Fic!

Great mix of social commentary of this interpretation of Kryptoain Life, cute Ace and Krypto play and hot as hell public hand striping. Naughty Bruce! And Clark, you pervert! Enjoying these human ways.

Great bit of fun for a Friday afternoon.

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Date: 2009-01-09 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Hand strip teases for the win! LOL, I wish I could have filmed that somehow, I think it took forever in motion but I couldn't exactly dwell on it for three paragraphs. :) I'm having so much fun with Kryptonian culture in this one--in some ways I like it, it's very cultured and subtle, just...no touching. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 2009-01-09 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seiberwing.livejournal.com
To the Kal cave!

And of course even the caves have to be better than normal Earth caves, in fitting with the Kryptonians themselves.

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Date: 2009-01-09 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Super-sparkly caves! Not exactly what Bruce saw himself working in--it's going to be hard to brood surrounded by glitter--but I think he'll get by. :)

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Date: 2009-01-09 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ranger-girl0301.livejournal.com
Love this series! So very happy to see more of it!!

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Date: 2009-01-10 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I always enjoy writing this series! Glad to hear you like the results. :)

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Date: 2009-01-09 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elenorasweet.livejournal.com
Omg, more from my favourite Kal!fic! *hugs you* Thankyouthankyou! I can't wait to see them step out into the world, and kick Lex's butt. And the bar scene... so damn erotic, without atcually being anything to us, it was gorgeous!

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Date: 2009-01-10 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I want to see them defeat Lex too! Now I just need to...figure out Lex's plans, lol, so they can defeat them. I'm glad you liked the bar scene, it was so fun to write!

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Date: 2009-01-09 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jainas.livejournal.com
I love all the culturals differences -subtle or not- that you created for this story.
Of course there are dens of iniquity in Krypton, where touching is public is allowed (are they in Kantor by the way ?), and trust Bruce to know where they are...

While reading this piece I was thinking of the wonderful book Ali & Nino by Kurban Saib, where the two main characters are from different cultures...

Also, I'd love to see more about Alfred adventures in Kypton. :)

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Date: 2009-01-10 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I'm having so much fun with the intercultural romance, lol. They're not in Kandor--this is an AU where Krypton never exploded, so Kal is fully Kryptonian in culture. :)

I really need to get a scene with Alfred in there! It must be hard on him in so many ways, since he doesn't have the relationship with Kal to buffer the culture shock, either... hm, thanks for the reminder and the comment!

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Date: 2009-01-09 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com
You rated this PG, so I thought it would be safe for work. *lol* So, so not. At least not for me. haha! /is a dork.

Took me nearly three hours - in little bits of stolen time - to finally read this all the way to the end. I expect my mouth was probably gaping most of the time. ;)

It's amazing what anticipation you can create out of something so simple as a touch, that we would take for granted -- they don't, and so you just sit there and wait for it to happen, and want it to happen, and... when it actually does, it's just... wow. And it's just Bruce taking off his gloves. ...and it's not even a living image of him, it's just words on the page, but... oh my! :D

Loved it. Will definitely need to come back and read it over again, when I have time to do so in one go, instead of stopping all the time to check on tests and machines and... bleh. ;)

Thanks for sharing!!

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Date: 2009-01-10 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I think that's the coolest compliment I can imagine for this story, that's it's PG and NSFW. :) It was so fun to put myself in Kal's head and imagine how he'd be affected by something as small as Bruce taking off gloves. Yum. I'm thrilled to hear it worked for you! *dances*

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Date: 2009-01-09 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dm-wyatt.livejournal.com
I loved how the make-out-in-public bar was like a speak-easy...

AWESOME!

I have a feeling that Lex Luthor is going to cause the newlyweds some headaches...

I can't wait to read more. (Hopefully there will be more...)

Love the sparkly caves. So not batcave-like, so it fits Clark Kal.

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Date: 2009-01-10 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I can't remember whose comment gave me the idea for the "cuddle bar," but I know it wasn't mine to begin with! But I had sooo much fun with it...

I'm hoping to have more! I have some vague ideas for what Lex has in mind, and I'm pretty sure I know the final scene, I just...don't know when it happens, lol. But I'm enjoying the process! Thanks so much for reading it!

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Date: 2009-01-09 04:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bradygirl_12
This was awesome, Mithen! :)

I love this Victorian-style society. That bit about Lara complaining about Bruce going gloveless was pure Victoriana! :)

And the gay subculture turned into a sensuous subculture is a great social commentary. I wonder how many people today realize that gays really had to hang out in bars for any kind of 'normal' contact between them, and if the police raided the place, had to switch their dance partners to opposite-sex couples if it was a mixed bar.

The idea of the masks is a great one, as were the colors the boys chose.

The cave is brilliant! LOL! Yes, Bruce prefers dark and brooding, but forget it, Bruce, you're with Bright 'n' Shining Kal now! ;)

Dick would absolutely adore this cave. LOL!

Oh, and Lex is so silkily evil in this chapter by just walking his dog! :)

Krypto and Ace are cute! :)

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Date: 2009-01-10 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I've been having so much fun with the Victorian aspects of Krypton! The science, the sexual repression, it works so well.

I hadn't known about the couples in the bars changing partners if the police raided! That's an interesting strategy...

LOL, and only Lex could be evil while walking his dog. He's a master at it!

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Date: 2009-01-09 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tygati.livejournal.com
*random incoherent squeeing here*

There is something to be said for your ability to take what would ordinarily be a simple, chaste touch and turn it into something hotter than an actual sex scene. Wow.

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Date: 2009-01-11 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you so much! With hands like Bruce's he makes it easy. :)

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Date: 2009-01-09 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xantucis.livejournal.com
Oh, a new part in this wonderful series!

I like how you show us their daily lives in this society. It's good to see there are differences where Kryptonians aren't as stern as otherwise - like personal space. And of course Bruce manages to find the hardcore clubs within weeks. LOL!

Interesting idea to make the cave more colorful than The Birdcage... ^_~
...can't wait to see where you are going with this.

Great story! :)

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Date: 2009-01-11 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I love your icon!

I'm having a lot of fun showing Kryptonian society. I'Ve always loved the idea of it being a generally positive place but alien in odd ways like touching. I need to get Kal back to Earth for some fish-out-of-water in the reverse direction. :)

Thanks so much for the feedback!

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Date: 2009-01-09 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
*squees*

More fic from this verse, yay!!! :D

it would be all Kal could do to keep from doing something shocking, like reaching out to touch Bruce's shoulder, right there in front of his parents!

*pets Kal* He's utterly adorable in this verse! He knows so much and yet so little... *pets him again*

At the moment, unfortunately, Bruce's body language spoke of frustration. He was making marks on a piece of paper and toying with two pieces of metal, a Kryptonian alloy that had caught his attention immediately.

Tinker!Bruce! :D *glomps him*

Lara looked rather annoyed as well. "Brucie, is it true?"

Eee, I love how you've been able to work the Brucie part in!

"We definitely need to find a secret lair as soon as possible," Bruce said.

Hee! *pets them both*

Ace, of course, was heeling perfectly, trotting alongside Bruce with an almost regimental precision, muzzle held high and ears lifted.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! Ace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *flails* :D

Kal was suddenly pulled almost off his feet as Krypto took off after a floating bit of paper. Bounding wildly over the grass barking, Krypto halted so suddenly Kal almost fell on top of him, then scratched himself amiably and licked Kal's face before charging back at the rather bemused Ace.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! Krypto!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hee! :D *hearts them*

Confused, Krypto returned to Kal's side, casting sorrowful glances at the other dog.

*pets Krypto* Aw, it's okay! You don't want to play with the nasty dog anyway. Ace is so much better! :p

Krypto whined and Ace licked his ear.

Awwwwwwwwwww!!!! So cute! *hearts them again*

Look at these hands, these hands that touch my body and bring me pleasure. Look at how beautiful they are. Am I not to be envied indeed?

Hee. *pets hand obsessed!Kal*

They stumbled homeward, the fog swirling around them, protecting them from prying eyes as they touched and kissed and walked hand-in-hand, shameless and joyous.

Aw. *glomps them*

The brilliant crystalline stalagmites caught and reflected and flung the light in a thousand infinite prisms: sapphire, ruby, emerald, topaz. Refracted light danced off of the rainbow-hued stones of the walls: viridian, carnelian, lapis. Countless colors in endless shades, an explosion of pastel and neon and deep jewel tones cascading around them, endlessly changing.

Oooooh! That's so pretty!

His shoulders were shaking as he stared around the cave, hand clamped over his mouth in an attempt to muffle his mirth, a look of disbelief in his eyes. "It's...not exactly what I imagined," he said after a moment, his voice trembling with laughter.

*giggles* *glomps Bruce*

"No," Bruce said. "I think it's perfect for Nightwing and Flamebird." He looked around the vast cavern again, appraising, nodding slightly. "Perfect for us."

Awwww!!! So sweet. They're got their Fortress of Solitude! Or, um... Cave of Solitude? lol.

This was so wonderful and sweet! :D Awwww... *glows happily*

I'm so glad you're back and posting fic again, yay! :D *glomps*

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Date: 2009-01-11 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Mmmm...Bruce tinkering is always delicious to me. :) And I laughed because we both had Krypto and Ace in our stories for Rai! Yay for puppies!

I love the Cave of Solitude, lol. It's a fun mix of Bruce and Clark's hideouts. I'm enjoying imagining Bruce trying to work there, like working in a giant disco ball, lol...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Imagining Bruce's hands made me very happy while writing this...

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Date: 2009-01-09 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bengleman.livejournal.com
Well hey! This was great- hee hee, Lex's dog is named Prudence, that amuses me so much for some reason! I loved Krypto and Ace and when Kal's mum burst in saying that Bruce was seen outside without his gloves briefly I was muchos confused for a sec thar before I caught on. Yeh... I totally couldn't live in a society like that, it's hard enough trying to cover up in India and back in london in the summer i spend half my life wandering around without a shirt on- that and I HATE gloves.

I can see how it would be so, i dunno, *frustrating* for Bruce to not have any privacy- I don't think many people would be happy with that. It must be a hell of a culture shock!

I wonder what your portrayal of Kryptonians would think of Earth and humans.

Anyway- this was great to read, even if it was only off a teeny tiny phone screen it still made me happy.

Brooskie.

ps) glinty glinty caves and hand-strip teases are made of win and awesome sauce!

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Date: 2009-01-11 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I wasn't sure if Lex's dog was Prudence or Patience, but the former just sounded a bit funnier so I went with it. :)

Bruce is being very good about the culture shock, but the lack of privacy is kind of a breaking point with him, yeah. I need to get Kal back to Earth for some reverse culture shock! :) *starts planning and plotting*

Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2009-01-09 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] batfan-sarah.livejournal.com
this was lovely! haaand pooorn!

i'm so glad to see you back! :)

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Date: 2009-01-11 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I had shameless amounts of fun with the hand porn, lol. Glad you liked it too! *runs off to keep working on belated birthday fic*

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Date: 2009-01-09 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yanyann.livejournal.com
The next chapter of "From This Day Forward". YES!!!

Love it, love it, love it. Especially the Krypton and Earth culture differences. XD

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Date: 2009-01-11 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I'm really getting a kick out of writing an intercultural marriage! :) I'll be writing the next chapter once I can figure out what Lex is up to, lol...

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Date: 2009-01-10 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyivy.livejournal.com
Oh this was lovely. I am so happy you are writing more in this universe.

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Date: 2009-01-11 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I enjoy it too much to leave it alone for terribly long! I'm contemplating the next part already, hmmm...

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much!

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Date: 2009-01-10 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ccarroll003.livejournal.com
Poor Bruce, getting no privacy.

I like the masks. The folks at the bar sure got a show.

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Date: 2009-01-11 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
A lack of privacy is a terrifying thing! I think the cave will help them work around it, although Bruce needs to start coming up with an excuse for why he disappears for hours, hmmmm...

The bar scene was so much fun to write! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 2009-01-10 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] batfan-sarah.livejournal.com
by the by, my birthday was on the 5th, and i would just love love love any little something you could churn out. the holidays and my birthday really kind of sucked this year, and since you're back and all....well...yeah :P

much love on this chapter once again!

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Date: 2009-01-11 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
*hugs* A terrible birthday will never do! I'll see what I can do in the way of belated pick-Sarah-ups...

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Date: 2009-01-10 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yavieriel.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, gorgeous. I really like this - modesty taboos have always fascinated me, and the way this AU is playing with them is really interesting. It makes me think of the Victorians, very much, especially the bit about the gloves; going bare-handed, so shocking! Also the different attitudes toward privacy; no sense of personal space, because why should anyone need that, if they're never allowed to touch? It's interesting for me, because I find more and more that I prefer to dress modestly, covered from the chin down, gloves and all, but I can only enjoy it because I know that I can wear a miniskirt and a halter top if I want (and occasionally, at the beach, I do). I enjoy waltzing, because I've seen what club dancing looks like. To be *forced* into the kind of restriction Krypton expects would be incredibly frustrating. Regardless of how it's come by, though, modesty and restraint give a weight to actions that they would not have otherwise, and I find that really lovely.

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Date: 2009-01-11 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Mmm, so many interesting thoughts here! Yeah, I had a lot of fun playing with the culture, and it made sense that a culture with strong touching taboos would be pretty relaxed about personal space. Modesty as a choice is one thing, but modesty that's really required is a total pain, lol... But we get to enjoy the results! Thanks for the cool feedback!

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Date: 2009-01-10 06:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rai-daydreamer.livejournal.com
Oh, I really didn't expected this continuation on my birthday! *flails*

The touches with only bare hands! It's so sensual and beautiful image... awwwww. And poor Kal and Bruce. What a terrible culture that they have no privacy, they are newly wed!
But they found the secret lair at last. XD The cave was all glittering and full of colors? Bruce can't keep his Bat-attitude there even if he already gained it, I suppose. *giggles*
(And I'm wondering what Kal would think about them making love in this bright place. X3)

Eee, and Ace and Krypto! I love them so much!

but Bruce was a living flame in his arms, all grace and beauty, completely artless and natural, swaying into his touch and touching in turn.

I really loved this phrase. So beautiful. So Bruce.

Thank you very much for this sensual story! I still can't believe this is only PG. *grins*

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Date: 2009-01-11 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
*hugs* I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Rai! I was happy to find them a bit of privacy, and...I've imagined them making out in the cave most definitely, lol. Mmmm...sparkles everywhere. :)

Um, now that I look at it, it probably should be PG-13 for the language at the beginning! :) But they stay fully dressed the rest of the time...

Happy birthday again!

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Date: 2009-01-13 02:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] northernwalker
I shouldn't need a cold shower with a PG rating, right?

I do if it's you writing it! Very sensual, hon.

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Date: 2009-01-14 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
It...probably should be PG-13...but only for the language at the beginning! The bar scene is chaste as anything. ;) Glad you liked it!

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Date: 2009-01-14 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guani.livejournal.com
This can't possibly be PG, even if it's just hands! :)
And Kal needs to visit earth one of these days and have his own culture shock.
*evil chuckle*

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Date: 2009-01-14 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I sooo want to write Kal on Earth with Bruce. *grin* I'm trying to think of somewhere with lots and lots of really obvious public contact between couples, beyond a club.

Oh, a beach trip might be in order. :) Poor Kal. hehehehe...

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Date: 2009-02-01 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimsonquills.livejournal.com
God, I love it when Kal is perverted. :-D That scene in the club with all the slow, careful, subtle touching is blisteringly hot. You use the Kryptonian culture to transform otherwise tame touches into immensely sexy moments. Mmmmm. Beautifully done.

That may be my favorite part of the fic, but the brilliance of the cave Kal brings Bruce to is a close runner up. *grins* And a great metaphor for the different emotional track Bruce's life is taking, having marrid Kal!

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Date: 2009-02-02 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I'm having sooo much fun with Kryptonian culture and using it to write smutless smut, lol. :)

I liked the idea of the cave as a metaphor too! A mix of Kryptonian and battiness, with sparkles thrown in (must not think of Twilight...) Glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 2009-02-05 01:06 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] zellieh
Okay, now I've found you, I'm just diving in and reading all the stories I missed, and I adore this sequence. The alienness of the culture and the sensuality is brilliantly done. I got to the part about the crystal cave and *smiled* because where will Bruce go to brood and lurk?

In one of your comments above you were thinking of places people could go and touch in public, and I immediately thought of sports arenas, with the audience all crowded in together, and the athletes wearing tight-fitting clothes. Can you imagine Kal's reaction to sitting in a crowd, watching the Olympic swimmers, or runners in lycra, or even tennis? Heck, a wealthy cocktail party at Wayne Manor with polite ballroom dancing would be an orgy to this Kal. (Am I evil to want to see Bruce tango with Kal? Or even just to see his reaction to the waltz?) *g*

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Date: 2009-02-06 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
OMG, the image of Bruce teaching Kal how to dance is so wonderful! I ended up with them on the beach so Kal can rub suntan lotion all over Bruce, lol. But the dancing! Ooohhhh...

And Bruce losing his brooding-cave made me giggle, the poor dear. He will have to make do!

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Date: 2009-02-10 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com
Heeeee!!! ^_^ I'm so glad they found a place where they can touch without fear of reprisal. And the cave!! It's absolutely perfect for them. :D

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Date: 2009-02-11 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I was happy they found a place that was "theirs" as well, and matches them in this world. :) I'm glad you liked it!
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