Fic: Let No Man Put Asunder
Feb. 15th, 2009 08:54 amTitle: Let No Man Put Asunder
Characters/Pairings: Kal/Bruce, Lex Luthor, Lara, Jor-El, Zatanna
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kal is summoned to a meeting and discovers all is not quite as it seems on Krypton. A continuation of the From This Day Forward series.
Word count: 2000
< ...and this latest act by Nightwing and Flamebird shows that the two vigilantes are unlikely to be giving themselves up anytime soon. For the Kryptonopolis News, I'm Kal-El reporting. >
Jor-El harrumphed as the news clip came to a close. < Reckless, mad fools. They'll destabilize Kryptonian society with their antics. >
Kal shot Bruce a quick glance, but Bruce was flipping through the pages of a fashion magazine and didn't respond to Jor-El's statement. Of course, he wasn't supposed to understand Kryptonian at all, so he had little choice.
"Now, Jor," Lara said in English, "You must admit they've done some good as well."
Another annoyed noise from Kal's father, although he switched into English too. "The only good thing they've done is helped Kal's career. They'll get themselves killed, flitting around in the sky like that."
Lara sighed and clasped her hands together dramatically. "Well, I think they're rather dashing."
Bruce held up his fashion magazine. "They seem to have inspired a whole new line of men's wear."
"Oh, let me look!" Lara snatched the magazine from Bruce and flipped through the pages with gusto.
"Orange and indigo seem to be the in colors of the season," Bruce said, looking at Kal. Kal risked a glance at the pages and had a hard time not blushing at the "artist's rendition" of what Nightwing and Flamebird probably looked like without their masks. He was definitely not that good-looking.
Although they didn't really seem to have done Bruce justice.
Lara handed Bruce the magazine back, looking thoughtful. "I think they're doing good things. Kryptonian society is going to have to change, Jor, you know that--"
Jor-El grunted. "We'll cross that bridge when we come to it, and it won't be because some reckless daredevils risked their necks to push us across it." He stood up and stalked from the room.
Lara smiled after him, a little sadly. "He's having a hard time adjusting to all these new things--these vigilantes, the contact with Terra, it all brings change. And your father's never been comfortable with change." She brightened. "Did you see that a shusi restaurant has opened near the Crystal Square?"
"That's sushi, Mother," said Kal, suppressing a smile.
Lara waved a hand dismissively. "Whatever, I've heard it's delicious. We should go there sometime." She smiled at Bruce. "Not all Kryptonians are completely opposed to change."
: : :
"Zee?"
Kal and Bruce were shopping for appliances--with Bruce casting covetous glances at different bits of technology--when Bruce suddenly darted into the crowd. He came back with a young woman in tow, dark hair tumbling over her shoulders and a rather alarmed look on her face. "Zatanna!" said Bruce. "What are you doing here on Krypton? Travel here is very restricted!" He noticed the woman was casting glances at Kal and stopped abruptly. "Oh, Zatanna, this is my husband Kal-El. Kal-El, this is Zatanna Zatara, an...old friend of mine."
Zatanna didn't attempt to shake Kal's hand, which indicated she knew something about Kryptonian culture. "It's a pleasure to meet you," she said, nodding politely.
"Zee," Bruce said again, "What are you doing here?"
"I could probably ask you the same," she said with a sudden, impish grin.
"Me? I'm...married. Learning Kryptonian culture. Living quietly."
Zatanna shook her head, still smiling. "Oh, Bruce, really." She raised her hands to brush aside his words. "It's all right, I won't pry." She leaned in close, almost touching him. "Eb efas," she said, then turned and melted into the crowd.
"What was that all about?" Kal felt a twinge of jealousy at how familiar they had seemed. "What was that language at the end?"
"Zee's a magic-user," Bruce said absently. "She speaks her spells backwards. She and her father are two of the greatest escape artists and illusionists on Terra--but for them the magic is real as well."
Kal frowned. "I don't know that word."
"Which one?"
"'Magic.'"
"It's...uh..." Bruce cast his eyes up for a second. "I can't think of a word for it in Kryptonian. It's...power that doesn't conform to the laws of science or nature."
Kal scoffed as they left the store and headed for home. "There's no such thing, Bruce."
Bruce cast him a surprised, somewhat speculative glance. "Not even in your stories? Your legends?"
"Everything can be explained by science, Bruce," Kal said, knowing he sounded a bit pompous.
"That's interesting," Bruce murmured. He frowned. "She still didn't say why she was here."
When they got back to the El compound Bruce immediately started doing research on "magic," but turned up nothing at all in Kryptonian language or culture.
: : :
Kal looked around the meeting room, shifting in his uncomfortable seat. The Council of Science was seated on a dais at the front of the room, Jor-El among the ten men and women seated there. In front of the dais were the Kryptonians who had been married off to Terrans.
Kal had been called abruptly to this meeting but had no idea what it was about. Judging from the puzzled looks on the other Kryptonian's faces, they didn't know either.
The Council members, he noticed, looked very grave. Kal felt a sudden moment of stammering panic--had they figured out about Nightwing and Flamebird? But surely they would have called Bruce here as well in that case. No, it was impossible.
But his heart was still pounding as Jor-El stood to address the group.
"My fellow Kryptonians, we are here today to give you good news, and to explain the precarious situation in which we find ourselves. The good news is that Moka Ghil-Zha and her Terran husband have succeeded in combining their DNA to produce offspring." A murmur went around the room; Moka looked as surprised as everyone else. "The matrix technicians sent word back to us today that the fetus is thriving within her birthing crystal and shows every sign of being strong and healthy." He bowed toward Moka. "Congratulations to you and your husband."
Turning back to the fuller assembly, he said, "Even more importantly, the fetus shows signs of being able to use...magic." He used the English word; puzzled frowns creased the faces of the other Kryptonians. "Magic is an ability to manipulate reality in ways not bound by the laws of science."
Beside Kal, Jhal Farad-Ko snorted. "That's impossible."
Jor-El shook his head gravely. "I have seen this magic, and I assure you it is real, and it is not science. The human species has within them the ability--latent in most--to use this kind of power. Kryptonians do not." He paused and took a deep breath. "This is why we are doomed if we do not change our ways."
"Speak clearly, Jor-El," snapped Jhal as the room erupted in chatter. "What do you mean, doomed?"
Jor-El looked pained. "Two decades ago, I discovered a seismic flaw at the heart of our planet. Countermeasures were taken which we thought halted the process." His hands clenched. "They merely delayed it." He raised his voice to cut over the frightened babble. "The flaw is not scientific, it is a rift caused by magic of some sort, and it can only be halted by magic." His shoulders slumped. "We have been borrowing Terrans skilled in its use, asking them to help hold our splintering planet together. But even with their help, we have merely slowed down the process. We are doomed...unless we interbreed with them to create Kryptonians who can sense and use this magic. It seems, based on scans by the Terran magicians, that Kryptonian/Terran crossbreeds may be strong in magic, strong enough to hold our world together. For all our sakes, we can only hope so."
Jhal Farad-Ko was on her feet. "So you're saying that without help from Terra--"
"--Krypton will die within decades. Yes."
Jhal seemed deeply disturbed by this; she chewed on her lower lip, her hands clenched. "There must be some other way," she muttered.
"I know you have hated the idea of contact with Terran culture, Jhal." Jor-El's voice was compassionate. "I also find the idea...upsetting. But there is no other way. We must begin to open up communication and interchange with Terra, to create as many chances as possible for magic to enter our race's genetic makeup."
Jhal wrung her hands sharply, then turned and left the room.
The Council Chair stood as Jor-El sat down, his posture sagging. "This meeting is adjourned," she announced.
As Kal and his father walked home, Kal cast a sideways glance at Jor-El. "Does it upset you so much?"
Jor-El's chuckle was bleak. "The prospect of our world exploding? A little, yes."
"No, I mean...the idea of having grandchildren that are half-Terran. Bruce's children."
Jor-El stopped, frowning, and looked at Kal. "That's not it at all, Kal. Bruce is..." he paused as if looking for the right words, "...a fitting mate for you. I would be proud to have his children within the House of El." Kal blinked, surprised at Jor-El's praise. Usually he tried to act as if Bruce weren't even there.
His father laughed weakly at Kal's expression. "Oh, my son. Your mother and I aren't as--" He broke off. "Well, never mind that." He turned away and resumed walking. "I'll admit I've been resistant to the idea of interaction with Terran culture. It's so...alien. But my observations of Bruce, and of the brave magicians who have come from Terra to exert their energies to save a planet, for no reason than because they will not let sentient beings die..." He sighed. "Krypton could do worse than to join our genetic destiny to Terra's."
: : :
"--I refuse to go through with it!" Jhal Farad-Ko's voice was sharp enough to rattle the beakers in their shared laboratory. "Are you mad? When I thought it would merely isolate the two planets, that was different. But I will not be a party to an action that will mean the eventual doom of my entire planet, Lex!"
Lex looked around the lab at the crystal wonders he had yet to figure out, the technology still waiting to be looted. "But we're nearly ready! We've been planning this for nearly a year now, surely you won't back out just because--"
"--Just because it will condemn my planet to death within a few decades?" Jhal stared at him. "You are mad!"
"The explosions will trap some of the magicians here on Krypton, they'll be able to hold the place together." Lex didn't like the look in Jhal's eyes at all.
"It isn't enough, Lex. If we do it now, there won't be enough humans on Krypton to affect our DNA in any meaningful way. When the Terran magicians grow older and weaker, we'll all be doomed. No, we must delay at least another ten years. Repugnant as it is to me, I see no other way."
Lex studied Jhal's face. Her jaw was set in a stubborn, closed line, her eyes narrowed. "But surely--"
Jhal's eyes snapped fury. "If you persist in this course, I will have no choice but to report you to the authorities."
Lex sighed and let his shoulders slump. He slowly walked over to his workbench. "I'm sorry you feel this way, Jhal." His hand came to rest on the lead container filled with the jagged shards of his green mineral. His Luthorium. "I'm really quite sorry."
: : :
He was lucky, Lex considered as he washed his hands later, that Kryptonians were such an insular lot. It might be a week or two before someone came by to check on Jhal, who was known for disappearing into her lab for days at a time. Threads of red lifted from his hands and faded into the water, and he soaped his hands one more time, contemplating his next course of action. It was going to be more difficult to pull this off with only one person, but he was sure it could be done.
He was whistling to himself as he headed back to his drafting board.
Characters/Pairings: Kal/Bruce, Lex Luthor, Lara, Jor-El, Zatanna
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kal is summoned to a meeting and discovers all is not quite as it seems on Krypton. A continuation of the From This Day Forward series.
Word count: 2000
< ...and this latest act by Nightwing and Flamebird shows that the two vigilantes are unlikely to be giving themselves up anytime soon. For the Kryptonopolis News, I'm Kal-El reporting. >
Jor-El harrumphed as the news clip came to a close. < Reckless, mad fools. They'll destabilize Kryptonian society with their antics. >
Kal shot Bruce a quick glance, but Bruce was flipping through the pages of a fashion magazine and didn't respond to Jor-El's statement. Of course, he wasn't supposed to understand Kryptonian at all, so he had little choice.
"Now, Jor," Lara said in English, "You must admit they've done some good as well."
Another annoyed noise from Kal's father, although he switched into English too. "The only good thing they've done is helped Kal's career. They'll get themselves killed, flitting around in the sky like that."
Lara sighed and clasped her hands together dramatically. "Well, I think they're rather dashing."
Bruce held up his fashion magazine. "They seem to have inspired a whole new line of men's wear."
"Oh, let me look!" Lara snatched the magazine from Bruce and flipped through the pages with gusto.
"Orange and indigo seem to be the in colors of the season," Bruce said, looking at Kal. Kal risked a glance at the pages and had a hard time not blushing at the "artist's rendition" of what Nightwing and Flamebird probably looked like without their masks. He was definitely not that good-looking.
Although they didn't really seem to have done Bruce justice.
Lara handed Bruce the magazine back, looking thoughtful. "I think they're doing good things. Kryptonian society is going to have to change, Jor, you know that--"
Jor-El grunted. "We'll cross that bridge when we come to it, and it won't be because some reckless daredevils risked their necks to push us across it." He stood up and stalked from the room.
Lara smiled after him, a little sadly. "He's having a hard time adjusting to all these new things--these vigilantes, the contact with Terra, it all brings change. And your father's never been comfortable with change." She brightened. "Did you see that a shusi restaurant has opened near the Crystal Square?"
"That's sushi, Mother," said Kal, suppressing a smile.
Lara waved a hand dismissively. "Whatever, I've heard it's delicious. We should go there sometime." She smiled at Bruce. "Not all Kryptonians are completely opposed to change."
: : :
"Zee?"
Kal and Bruce were shopping for appliances--with Bruce casting covetous glances at different bits of technology--when Bruce suddenly darted into the crowd. He came back with a young woman in tow, dark hair tumbling over her shoulders and a rather alarmed look on her face. "Zatanna!" said Bruce. "What are you doing here on Krypton? Travel here is very restricted!" He noticed the woman was casting glances at Kal and stopped abruptly. "Oh, Zatanna, this is my husband Kal-El. Kal-El, this is Zatanna Zatara, an...old friend of mine."
Zatanna didn't attempt to shake Kal's hand, which indicated she knew something about Kryptonian culture. "It's a pleasure to meet you," she said, nodding politely.
"Zee," Bruce said again, "What are you doing here?"
"I could probably ask you the same," she said with a sudden, impish grin.
"Me? I'm...married. Learning Kryptonian culture. Living quietly."
Zatanna shook her head, still smiling. "Oh, Bruce, really." She raised her hands to brush aside his words. "It's all right, I won't pry." She leaned in close, almost touching him. "Eb efas," she said, then turned and melted into the crowd.
"What was that all about?" Kal felt a twinge of jealousy at how familiar they had seemed. "What was that language at the end?"
"Zee's a magic-user," Bruce said absently. "She speaks her spells backwards. She and her father are two of the greatest escape artists and illusionists on Terra--but for them the magic is real as well."
Kal frowned. "I don't know that word."
"Which one?"
"'Magic.'"
"It's...uh..." Bruce cast his eyes up for a second. "I can't think of a word for it in Kryptonian. It's...power that doesn't conform to the laws of science or nature."
Kal scoffed as they left the store and headed for home. "There's no such thing, Bruce."
Bruce cast him a surprised, somewhat speculative glance. "Not even in your stories? Your legends?"
"Everything can be explained by science, Bruce," Kal said, knowing he sounded a bit pompous.
"That's interesting," Bruce murmured. He frowned. "She still didn't say why she was here."
When they got back to the El compound Bruce immediately started doing research on "magic," but turned up nothing at all in Kryptonian language or culture.
: : :
Kal looked around the meeting room, shifting in his uncomfortable seat. The Council of Science was seated on a dais at the front of the room, Jor-El among the ten men and women seated there. In front of the dais were the Kryptonians who had been married off to Terrans.
Kal had been called abruptly to this meeting but had no idea what it was about. Judging from the puzzled looks on the other Kryptonian's faces, they didn't know either.
The Council members, he noticed, looked very grave. Kal felt a sudden moment of stammering panic--had they figured out about Nightwing and Flamebird? But surely they would have called Bruce here as well in that case. No, it was impossible.
But his heart was still pounding as Jor-El stood to address the group.
"My fellow Kryptonians, we are here today to give you good news, and to explain the precarious situation in which we find ourselves. The good news is that Moka Ghil-Zha and her Terran husband have succeeded in combining their DNA to produce offspring." A murmur went around the room; Moka looked as surprised as everyone else. "The matrix technicians sent word back to us today that the fetus is thriving within her birthing crystal and shows every sign of being strong and healthy." He bowed toward Moka. "Congratulations to you and your husband."
Turning back to the fuller assembly, he said, "Even more importantly, the fetus shows signs of being able to use...magic." He used the English word; puzzled frowns creased the faces of the other Kryptonians. "Magic is an ability to manipulate reality in ways not bound by the laws of science."
Beside Kal, Jhal Farad-Ko snorted. "That's impossible."
Jor-El shook his head gravely. "I have seen this magic, and I assure you it is real, and it is not science. The human species has within them the ability--latent in most--to use this kind of power. Kryptonians do not." He paused and took a deep breath. "This is why we are doomed if we do not change our ways."
"Speak clearly, Jor-El," snapped Jhal as the room erupted in chatter. "What do you mean, doomed?"
Jor-El looked pained. "Two decades ago, I discovered a seismic flaw at the heart of our planet. Countermeasures were taken which we thought halted the process." His hands clenched. "They merely delayed it." He raised his voice to cut over the frightened babble. "The flaw is not scientific, it is a rift caused by magic of some sort, and it can only be halted by magic." His shoulders slumped. "We have been borrowing Terrans skilled in its use, asking them to help hold our splintering planet together. But even with their help, we have merely slowed down the process. We are doomed...unless we interbreed with them to create Kryptonians who can sense and use this magic. It seems, based on scans by the Terran magicians, that Kryptonian/Terran crossbreeds may be strong in magic, strong enough to hold our world together. For all our sakes, we can only hope so."
Jhal Farad-Ko was on her feet. "So you're saying that without help from Terra--"
"--Krypton will die within decades. Yes."
Jhal seemed deeply disturbed by this; she chewed on her lower lip, her hands clenched. "There must be some other way," she muttered.
"I know you have hated the idea of contact with Terran culture, Jhal." Jor-El's voice was compassionate. "I also find the idea...upsetting. But there is no other way. We must begin to open up communication and interchange with Terra, to create as many chances as possible for magic to enter our race's genetic makeup."
Jhal wrung her hands sharply, then turned and left the room.
The Council Chair stood as Jor-El sat down, his posture sagging. "This meeting is adjourned," she announced.
As Kal and his father walked home, Kal cast a sideways glance at Jor-El. "Does it upset you so much?"
Jor-El's chuckle was bleak. "The prospect of our world exploding? A little, yes."
"No, I mean...the idea of having grandchildren that are half-Terran. Bruce's children."
Jor-El stopped, frowning, and looked at Kal. "That's not it at all, Kal. Bruce is..." he paused as if looking for the right words, "...a fitting mate for you. I would be proud to have his children within the House of El." Kal blinked, surprised at Jor-El's praise. Usually he tried to act as if Bruce weren't even there.
His father laughed weakly at Kal's expression. "Oh, my son. Your mother and I aren't as--" He broke off. "Well, never mind that." He turned away and resumed walking. "I'll admit I've been resistant to the idea of interaction with Terran culture. It's so...alien. But my observations of Bruce, and of the brave magicians who have come from Terra to exert their energies to save a planet, for no reason than because they will not let sentient beings die..." He sighed. "Krypton could do worse than to join our genetic destiny to Terra's."
: : :
"--I refuse to go through with it!" Jhal Farad-Ko's voice was sharp enough to rattle the beakers in their shared laboratory. "Are you mad? When I thought it would merely isolate the two planets, that was different. But I will not be a party to an action that will mean the eventual doom of my entire planet, Lex!"
Lex looked around the lab at the crystal wonders he had yet to figure out, the technology still waiting to be looted. "But we're nearly ready! We've been planning this for nearly a year now, surely you won't back out just because--"
"--Just because it will condemn my planet to death within a few decades?" Jhal stared at him. "You are mad!"
"The explosions will trap some of the magicians here on Krypton, they'll be able to hold the place together." Lex didn't like the look in Jhal's eyes at all.
"It isn't enough, Lex. If we do it now, there won't be enough humans on Krypton to affect our DNA in any meaningful way. When the Terran magicians grow older and weaker, we'll all be doomed. No, we must delay at least another ten years. Repugnant as it is to me, I see no other way."
Lex studied Jhal's face. Her jaw was set in a stubborn, closed line, her eyes narrowed. "But surely--"
Jhal's eyes snapped fury. "If you persist in this course, I will have no choice but to report you to the authorities."
Lex sighed and let his shoulders slump. He slowly walked over to his workbench. "I'm sorry you feel this way, Jhal." His hand came to rest on the lead container filled with the jagged shards of his green mineral. His Luthorium. "I'm really quite sorry."
: : :
He was lucky, Lex considered as he washed his hands later, that Kryptonians were such an insular lot. It might be a week or two before someone came by to check on Jhal, who was known for disappearing into her lab for days at a time. Threads of red lifted from his hands and faded into the water, and he soaped his hands one more time, contemplating his next course of action. It was going to be more difficult to pull this off with only one person, but he was sure it could be done.
He was whistling to himself as he headed back to his drafting board.
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Date: 2009-02-15 12:59 am (UTC)I adore this series, especially the glimpses of Kryptonian culture.
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:07 am (UTC)How did a planet with no magic come to have a magical rift at its heart?
I think magic exists on Krypton, they just have bred out of the genome the ability to manipulate it, thus they don't "see" it anymore and don't talk about it in their books.
Lex has no intention of being on this side when the gates get closed--he's going to loot as much as possible and set timers, then bolt. :)
The third question I'm still debating! I'm not sure Bruce is going to be willing to give me a straight answer within this series, lol...
I'm having a lot of fun with Kryptonian society in this one, I'm glad you've been enjoying it too!
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Date: 2009-02-15 01:26 am (UTC)Hmm, what's this about Jor-El and Lara not being...? ;)
Are they closet touchers? ;)
Lara's a doll! I love her flightiness and yet there's substance there. :)
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Date: 2009-02-15 01:45 am (UTC)That's my favourite version of them. 8D With closet!hippy Jor-El. Oh, I hope that's it!
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:11 am (UTC)Are they closet touchers? ;)
I think canonically in Byrne's take Jor-El at least is! If I remember right, his Lara wasn't, which is a pretty sad idea. :( I'm having fun with Lara, she's honestly a bit scattered but yeah, she's sharper than she lets on, too. :)
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Date: 2009-02-15 01:29 am (UTC)Bruce and Kal's children will be ADORABLE. ♥
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:14 am (UTC)I like to think there are some interesting side stories with the magicians working on Krypton with Jor-El and how he's come to learn more about humans and their capabilities.
(And he might not be entirely clueless about Kal and Bruce's night-time activities, and I don't mean the cuddling. *grin*)
I think my imagination balks at the idea of writing Bruce and Kal actually with children, but I suspect they will have them in this world and they'll be great dads, too. :)
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Date: 2009-02-15 01:51 am (UTC)(Or is Kon-El a cousin in this, like his namesake? Or... am I totally dreaming, heh!)
:3 Man, Lex really does give me the heeby jeebies. Good job making him sufficiently scary to give a green lantern goosebumps. *shiver*
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:28 am (UTC)I suspect (although I probably won't write it fully, being hopeless at stories about raising children, lol) that they do indeed have at least Kon-El later. And I'm glad you enjoyed Jor-El getting won over! He's a grouchy and insular person, but he's seen enough positive examples now that he's starting to suspect some cross-cultural interchange might be a benefit to Krypton.
I'm enjoying Lex in this one, I have to admit. *grin*
Thanks so much for reading and feedbacking!
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Date: 2009-02-15 02:53 am (UTC)Good old Lex is so pragmatic.
On an unrelated note, I just noticed the subtitle on your journal when I read this chapter! I approve, even if Chomsky loses much of his appeal when you have to do endless syntax trees to his specifications...:)
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:41 am (UTC)I kind of used the animated version of her here--she knows Bruce way too well to expect him to have a quiet life. :) That's true in mainstream canon now as well, I believe. I kind of like them that way.
On an unrelated note, I just noticed the subtitle on your journal when I read this chapter! I approve, even if Chomsky loses much of his appeal when you have to do endless syntax trees to his specifications...:)
*grin* My knowledge of Chomsky is mostly secondary sources, I confess...but I always loved that sentence, it's totally unforgettable. :)
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Date: 2009-02-15 03:37 am (UTC)I totally giggled at this -
He was definitely not that good-looking.
Although they didn't really seem to have done Bruce justice.
hehehe! Yes, Kal, you are!! And no, they can never make him look as beautiful as you see him with your own eyes -- it's something to do with being blinded by love, I think? Anyhoo... I thought it was really sweet and cute!
...and also, oooh! Evil!Lex - you're doing a great job with him. He's wonderfully evil. :D
I was so happy to see that you'd posted more of this. I wasn't expecting a new part so soon! And I'm really looking forward to the next ones. :D
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:50 am (UTC)*snicker* Poor BF! :)
I think a child or children is in the future for this version of them, though I'm unlikely to write it out in detail. The challenge of raising mixed-culture kids in such an environment would be enough to make my head spin even without my total lack of knowledge of standard child-raising! But I do think there's a Kon-El and maybe a Cir-El (poor Cir-El, I'd like her to have a happier storyline than what she got in canon) in their lives someday.
I admit to enjoying writing evil!Lex. :) Since I never watched Smallville I don't have to feel bad for him. *grin*
I'm hoping to have something of a climax up soon! It might need some more work and a postlogue of sorts...I'm hoping to get it betaed tomorrow...
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Date: 2009-02-15 03:42 am (UTC)And I love coldhearted, evil Luthor. He's so dastardly, just like in the movies. So looking forward to the next installment!
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:55 am (UTC)I can't help but see Bruce as rather ambivalent about having kids, but on the plus side I can promise there's no forced breeding in the future. *shudders* That would hit all of my squicks. There'll be a lot of encouraged marriages, and probably the Kryptonians will pay a lot of money for human sperm and eggs, but no one will be required to have kids.
And I love coldhearted, evil Luthor. He's so dastardly, just like in the movies.
*grin* Movie-Luthor is still kind of my ur-Luthor. I don't write him terribly often, because I know most people see him as a lot more sympathetic than I do, but when I need someone to be unrepentantly me-first-forget-the-aliens, he's my go-to character.
God, I love that icon. *watches it for a while, happily*
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:57 am (UTC)I'm also having fun writing Lex, I confess. He's a cold, cold man in this incarnation.
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Date: 2009-02-15 07:32 am (UTC)I'm enjoying this so far!
By the way, sushis are real good. I always find an excuse to go to Japanese restaurant and order some. My usual excuse is that they don't have fat. ;) *giggles*
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Date: 2009-02-15 09:59 am (UTC)I think there's one more chapter to go in this one before I pretty much wrap up--and it's mostly written! :) I'm hoping for a beta tomorrow...
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2009-02-15 11:00 am (UTC)Will they get a Kryptonian pet? OwO
I wonder how Bruce and Clark'd name their many childrens in the future XD
Great fic as always! :D
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Date: 2009-02-16 12:38 pm (UTC)I wonder how Bruce and Clark'd name their many childrens in the future XD
I've been contemplating it... ;)
Glad you liked it!
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Date: 2009-02-15 11:55 am (UTC)'His father laughed weakly at Kal's expression. "Oh, my son. Your mother and I aren't as--" '
I don't know about other people and from what I've read in the comments above maybe I'm wrong, but if I were to guess an ending to that sentance my mind instantly jumped to as stupid as we seem, or as naive as we seem or something like that. And given Jor-el's strange praise of Bruce just before this, I have to assume that Kal's parents have figured something out, if not the whole vigilante thing, at least that Bruce isn't half as foppish as he seems and all the implications that go with that. Personally I'd like to believe that they're figured out that Flamebird and Nightwing are Bruce and Kal, to me it fits that a good parents would be able to recognise big things like that in their children, even if their child thinks he's being cleverly secretive. Also it would explain Jor-el's insistence that the vigilante's are just going to get themselves killed- is he concerned for Kal?
Ah well, my mind has disappeared somewhere strange and multicoloured now so i'll just finish on the note that I actually LOVE your Lex so much in this. He rocks! His evilness dazzles me! And his proactive coldness makes me happy!
Yes, yes, I know it shouldn't but then again us Brits do have a bit of a cynical, sadistic streak :P
Mwah ha ha
(B x)
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Date: 2009-02-16 01:07 pm (UTC)*grin* Closet cuddling aside, that's exactly how Jor-El was going to end that sentence. :)
Also it would explain Jor-el's insistence that the vigilante's are just going to get themselves killed- is he concerned for Kal?
It would, and I love you for catching it. *hugs*
I'm always a little leery of writing Lex because he's often written quite sympathetically, but I like him as a cold-blooded mad(ish)-scientist killer. :) My beta convinced me to punch up his Evil Genius Speeches a bit in the next chapter and I'm glad he did. *grin*
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Date: 2009-02-15 02:24 pm (UTC)totally unrelated subject but, will you be posting more of your House of Earth serie soon
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Date: 2009-02-16 01:12 pm (UTC)House of Earth! Coincidentally, I'm hoping to post the beginning of the next arc next week! It's been done and partly betaed for a bit, but I wanted to wrap this series up because the conflicting images of Krypton (basically nice place versus conquering slavers) were kind of...dissonant. :) Thanks for asking about it, I'm really looking forward to having more up...
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Date: 2009-02-15 05:12 pm (UTC)Kal risked a glance at the pages and had a hard time not blushing at the "artist's rendition" of what Nightwing and Flamebird probably looked like without their masks. He was definitely not that good-looking.
Although they didn't really seem to have done Bruce justice.
Oh, Kal! You really are head-over-heels, aren't you? *snuggles him*
Love the magic, and Zee! And the utter lack of comprehension for magic the Kryptonians have. And I have to say, I felt ... sorry, for Jhal. Not just for what was done to her, but because she was willing to allow humans that bit longer, to save her planet. Intolerance makes people ugly, but true loyalty gives them that bit of beauty back.
Also, I think I'm developing a huge soft spot for Kal's parents, Lara and Jor-El. They're ... flustered but coping. And I think they'd be fabulous grandparents. *grin*
Fabulous!
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Date: 2009-02-16 01:15 pm (UTC)Yes, it was one of those strange cases where the very thing that made me like her more made her death inevitable. She's a chauvinist, but she'd never doom her own planet. I'd like to think (though I'll never know) that she probably wouldn't have destroyed Earth either, given the option, preferring simple isolation.
Lara and Jor-El make me very happy in this story. I've never written them extensively and I'd really like to think they'd be cool people. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying them! I love writing Kryptonian culture, because there are so many versions and visions of it, you can pick and choose and have a lot of fun. :)
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Date: 2009-02-15 07:00 pm (UTC)Heh!
Bruce held up his fashion magazine. "They seem to have inspired a whole new line of men's wear."
*giggles* Can you just imagine everyone wearing Blue and Red after Superman's debut?
Although they didn't really seem to have done Bruce justice.
*hearts Kal* He's so cute! :D
Lara waved a hand dismissively. "Whatever, I've heard it's delicious. We should go there sometime." She smiled at Bruce. "Not all Kryptonians are completely opposed to change."
Aww! I really liked Lara there. :)
He came back with a young woman in tow, dark hair tumbling over her shoulders and a rather alarmed look on her face. "Zatanna!" said Bruce. "What are you doing here on Krypton? Travel here is very restricted!"
Oooh! Zatanna!
Kal felt a twinge of jealousy at how familiar they had seemed.
Heh. *pets Kal*
"Everything can be explained by science, Bruce," Kal said, knowing he sounded a bit pompous.
It's a little odd, almost having Bruce and Kal switched around like that, with Kal saying that magic doesn't exist, while Bruce says it does, lol. *pets them*
"The flaw is not scientific, it is a rift caused by magic of some sort, and it can only be halted by magic." His shoulders slumped. "We have been borrowing Terrans skilled in its use, asking them to help hold our splintering planet together. But even with their help, we have merely slowed down the process.
That is... really not good.
Jor-El stopped, frowning, and looked at Kal. "That's not it at all, Kal. Bruce is..." he paused as if looking for the right words, "...a fitting mate for you. I would be proud to have his children within the House of El." Kal blinked, surprised at Jor-El's praise. Usually he tried to act as if Bruce weren't even there.
*pets Jor*
He was whistling to himself as he headed back to his drafting board.
Meeeeeeeep! Okay, I am really quite worried now. It was bad enough before what Lex was planning, but now... *frets*
I hope to see more from this verse soon! :)
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Date: 2009-02-16 01:21 pm (UTC)I bet there was a surge of what people imagined to be "Kryptonian fashion" on Earth. :) I bet Jimmy wore it!
It's a little odd, almost having Bruce and Kal switched around like that, with Kal saying that magic doesn't exist, while Bruce says it does, lol. *pets them*
Isn't it weird? It kind of cracked me up, but Bruce in comics has had to deal with it!
Meeeeeeeep! Okay, I am really quite worried now. It was bad enough before what Lex was planning, but now... *frets*
I'm hoping to post it tomorrow! That's the conclusion, and there'll be an epilogue, and then I'm done, wow! *looks a little sad* Well, I can always come back and play if I want to. *perks up again*
I'm so glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
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Date: 2009-02-16 05:22 pm (UTC)I am so happy to be reading regular fic updates from you again! *hugs*
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Date: 2009-02-16 11:16 pm (UTC)Lex always knows how to use a culture's mores against it...
I'll be putting the conclusion up today, I hope! :) Glad you're liking it!
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Date: 2009-02-16 07:41 pm (UTC)Plus I'm glad Jor-El likes the idea of grandkids with Bruce in the mix. Last I don't mind reading an evil Lex.
Angeloz
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Date: 2009-02-16 11:20 pm (UTC)I really came to like Jor and Lara here! It was fun to imagine their personalities and have them kind of develop as the story progressed.
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Date: 2009-02-16 09:39 pm (UTC)And, man, Krypton has no concept of magic? That's just . . . hard to wrap my brain around, but it makes a lot of sense. I have some trouble believing they never thought of magic (the way we think of it in our world, not DC where it demonstrably exists), but there's also the idea that it might have been suppressed once the science regime came to power. Of course, Kryptonians seem to deal with fear differently than humans, which might have something to do with it.
Bruce and Kal are still adorable. Just saying. That scene when Kal looks at the artist's rendition of Nightwing and Flamebird and is all, "I'm not that hot, but they failed at Bruce" was so cute. The whole scene with Zatanna was wonderful, too--she so doesn't believe Bruce is living quietly.
I like how the dynamics are shaping and changing in the House of El. Jor-El and Lara are slowly becoming defined characters, not just "Kal's parents." Bruce's Brucie deception has to be so much fuller and truer in this world because he has to live with people who don't know his secret.
Then there's Luthor. This version of him is enough to give me shivers.
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Date: 2009-02-16 11:25 pm (UTC)I agree, it's got to be stretching credulity, lol. *tiptoes around how implausible it is a bit* I mean, "magic" in the sense of "things that can't be explained by science" would seem to be a fairly inevitably universal concept!
Jor-El and Lara are slowly becoming defined characters, not just "Kal's parents."
I'm glad to hear that! They are in my mind as well, which is a very pleasurable feeling. I can imagine a bunch of different versions of these two--I was just re-reading the Byrne origin story last night and his Jor is a lot different from this, more movieverse sort of Jor, who are both very different from the animated series/Golden Age version (probably my favorite). And then there's Smallville... :)
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Date: 2009-02-17 04:15 am (UTC)In short, you are made of awesome. *g*
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Date: 2009-02-17 07:40 am (UTC)Lex was a lot of fun to write, my beta encouraged me to go in and add more Villainous Speeches, and I liked the way they worked out.
Your Kink Meme is making me all kinds of happy (just reading the prompts was a kick!) so I'm happy to return some pleasure your way, even if it is not awesome smut. *fans self*
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Date: 2009-02-17 07:34 pm (UTC)And Jor-El has bought a clue! Yay!
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Date: 2009-02-19 01:51 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-02-18 04:03 am (UTC)That "really quite sorry" line was a gem, but I didn't know that you were going to follow it up with . . . Wow.
(Congrats, you surprised me! I like that a lot. I was a bit worried that you were going to make Lex too... unthreatening? Because he wasn't smart enough to learn Kryptonian, when Bruce was. But this really does make up for it.)
"Threads of red"... *shivers*
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Date: 2009-02-19 02:04 am (UTC)(And there are probably places in canon where he does understand Kryptonian and I've just missed them! It would be really weird, frankly, if after all these years he hasn't learned something so obviously useful...)
I have no problems writing Lex as a cold-blooded killer and genocide planner, it's writing him as less villainous and more sympathetic I usually have problems with. :) Which is why I really love your Lex, he's got bigger plans than "Steal a lot of loot and blow up the planet." *grin*
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Date: 2009-03-02 12:30 am (UTC)Well. I guess I shouldn't have expected any better from Lex. I'd half figured he'd kill her before blowing the gates, anyway.
But I'm so glad Jor-El assured Kal that he liked Bruce and the prospect of Kal and Bruce having children. :) I'm also starting to get the feeling there may be more than meets the eye about Jor-El and Lara, too... *ponders*
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Date: 2009-03-02 02:12 pm (UTC)In the long run, writing Jor and Lara ended up being one of my favorite parts of this series! I kind of imagined them movieverse, for some reason, and I couldn't get the image of Marlon Brando out of my head for Jor-El, lol...