The theme of Bruce's heartbeat getting him through was a late addition, but it made me very happy to write! Excellent idea. :)
Oh good. :) I was a little afraid it might be hard for people to do! But he knows Clark would never forgive him if he let him continue to be controlled... You know, though I said it was hard to read, it was still easier than this part: "Let's start with something small. Something that keeps him close to the sound of my voice. Get on your hands and knees," said al Ghul, and Clark felt his body shift and lower. "Very nice," al Ghul said as if admiring a work of art. "Stay there." You are absolutely right. Bruce couldn't let Clark to be controlled. :)
I decided the arc had too many loose ends that needed tying up, so an epilogue was called for, and I ended up liking it as well. :) Very well decision! I'm glad there is one more chapter left to go. (I hope Clark will be able to go to Jason's Derby now - my big wish. :D) I look forward to the last chapter. :)
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Date: 2009-05-02 11:10 am (UTC)Excellent idea. :)
Oh good. :) I was a little afraid it might be hard for people to do! But he knows Clark would never forgive him if he let him continue to be controlled...
You know, though I said it was hard to read, it was still easier than this part: "Let's start with something small. Something that keeps him close to the sound of my voice. Get on your hands and knees," said al Ghul, and Clark felt his body shift and lower. "Very nice," al Ghul said as if admiring a work of art. "Stay there."
You are absolutely right. Bruce couldn't let Clark to be controlled. :)
I decided the arc had too many loose ends that needed tying up, so an epilogue was called for, and I ended up liking it as well. :) Very well decision! I'm glad there is one more chapter left to go. (I hope Clark will be able to go to Jason's Derby now - my big wish. :D)
I look forward to the last chapter. :)