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Title: Chapter Eight:  Watching the Moon
Pairing/Characters: Kal/Bruce, Alura, Zor-El, Kara Zor-El, Selina, Diana
Notes: "The House of the Earth" is an AU in which a few thousand Kryptonians escaped the destruction of Krypton to flee to Earth and conquer its people.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2700
Summary:  Kal has problems adjusting to life in Gotham--and meets his betrothed.

"It's good to have you back, nephew," said Zor-El.  He moved one of the triangular pieces of glass on the playing board, sat back and waited for Kal's move.

Kal stared at the board, but he wasn't particularly seeing it.  The morning sun slanted across the board, making the translucent pieces glow.  He and Zor had often played this game when Kal was a small child, before he had challenged his uncle's authority, before he had been sent away.  Many afternoons they would sit and play on the porch, Kal fidgeting in his seat, trying to concentrate.

He had always lost.

Kal moved one of the pieces nearly at random and Zor-El frowned.

"You haven't told us anything about your trip," said Alura from her chair overlooking the garden.  She was working on one of her holosculptures, spinning threads of light between her fingers, gazing out over the garden.

"There isn't much to tell, aunt.  We--I--had a good trip.  The spa was...very relaxing."  Next to his aunt's head, morning glories twined around a house column.  The brilliant blue flowers nodded slightly in the breeze.  He felt the sudden urge to pick one, to take the cerulean flower and put it behind Bruce's ear, just to watch Bruce's eyes roll in annoyance and hear him scoff.  The blue was as intense as Bruce's eyes, as deep as the sky.  But Bruce was seated at a cushion at his feet, and if Kal did anything so rash as tuck a flower behind his ear, he would merely cast his eyes down demurely.  No insults, no gibes, just sweetness and docility.

The healing bruises on Bruce's face were darker than the blue of the flowers.

Kal's hands itched suddenly to crush the flowers, to shatter the columns, to scatter the pieces of the game across the porch.  Anything to break the cloying silence and give him back the astringency of Bruce's mocking voice.

Instead he watched his uncle move another piece, then reached out to push one of his hexagons to meet Zor's advance.

Zor cocked his head and looked at Kal in silence for a while.  "You're still sulking about the marriage, aren't you?"

"The what?"

Zor's smile was thin.  "Let's not play games, Kal."  He moved another piece.  "You still haven't forgiven us for arranging a betrothal without checking with you."

Kal bit his lip, trying to keep his mind on the game, but the pieces were meaningless bits of color.  Game pieces shoved about the board.  "You still don't even know her name, do you?"

An eloquent shrug.  "Does it matter?"

Alura sighed from her seat.  "Syra will be so disappointed."

Zor snorted.  "Syra will survive.  She's a good Kryptonian and will understand that establishing diplomatic ties with the Amazons is more important than her personal future."

Kal somehow doubted that.

"Oh," said Zor as if a thought had just occurred to him, "Your new fiancee will be dining with us tomorrow night.  She wishes to meet you and to see the place she will soon call home.  You will, of course, show her around."

"Of course," said Kal.  "Maybe I'll even learn her name."

On the floor beside him, Bruce shifted on his cushion, bringing his head to rest on Kal's thigh.  Languid fingers trailed up and down Kal's calf, and Kal's hand was slightly unsteady when he reached out to move another piece.   As he waited for his uncle's move, he let his hand rest on Bruce's head, letting dark hair slip between his fingers, caressing.  He felt more than heard Bruce's small sigh at the touch, a tiny exhalation;  the fingers tightened on his thigh briefly.

Kal remembered firelight reflected in that dark hair, the way the wind lifted it as he looked at Kal, his gaze direct and fearless.  Laughter in his voice.  Untouchable. 

He shifted one of his stones across the board and Zor-El looked at it for a long time.  He sat back in his chair slowly.  "You win," he said.

Only when he looked at the board did Kal realize it was true.

: : :

Bruce and Kal were in the kitchen with Alfred when Kara came home from Metropolis.  Bruce was engrossed in conversation, so Kal left him and went to Kara's room.

Kara was seated at her desk, working on something.  She put her pen down as Kal approached, smiling.  "Cousin," she said.  "How was your trip?  Are you glad to be home?"

"Home?"  Kal couldn't keep the scorn from his voice;  he saw Kara's smile soften into something sadder, more wistful. 

"It's beautiful, isn't it?" she said.  "Terra."

"How much have you seen of it?"

She rolled the pen on her desk.  "Quite a lot.  I've been to Japan, the Sahara, the Maldives.  The Arctic--oh Kal, the aurora borealis in the arctic sky, it's so beautiful.  So peaceful."

Kal felt his breath catch.  "I want to see it!  I want to see all of it.  Even the little I did see--"  He remembered the gnarled forests, the rolling fields and scrublands, the mountains soaring into the sky, "--I want more.  I want to know it all."

Her smile was fond but still sad.  "I hope you can, Kal."  She turned back to the desk.  "I ran into Syra in Metropolis."

Kal's exhilaration faded abruptly.  "She must be furious."

"She isn't exactly thrilled, no," Kara said wryly.  "She insists you speak to her in person the next time you go there."

"Oh dear," said Kal, and Kara threw back her head and laughed. 

"You look so woebegone, cousin.  Come now, she's just one woman."

"You're just one woman as well, but one would do well to fear you," said Kal, and Kara bowed her head at the compliment, chuckling.

"Is it hard?"  Kal heard himself say.

Kara's smile faded.  "Is what hard?"

"Being away from Zhon so much."

Kara tilted her head thoughtfully, not deflecting the question.  "He's a telepath, Kal."  She tapped her temple.  "We're never that far away from each other."  She paused as if searching for words.  "And even if we didn't have that link, we would never be far apart in the way that matters."  This time her hand rested lightly over her heart.  "Not even galaxies could keep us apart in that way."

"How did you...how..."  Kal found himself wordless at the light in her eyes.

"He came to me," Kara whispered, as if she'd never spoken of it to anyone.  "He heard my despair, my confusion, and rage and hope, and he came to me.  He told me that I wasn't alone."  Her smile was terribly sweet.  "He didn't know it then, but I knew it right away, that I'd never be alone again with him in my life."  She touched her hand to her heart again, gently.  "Not even galaxies," she murmured.

"I see," said Kal.

"Yes," said Kara, "I think you do."

: : :

Kal lay in a patch of moonlight, staring at the ceiling.  Eventually, silently, he lifted himself from the bed.  Bruce was asleep on the floor at the foot of the bed, curled up in a pile of blankets.  Kal watched his breath rise and fall for a while, then made his way quietly out of his quarters and into the garden.

The kitchen gardens were still and silent, most of the garden beds bare in autumn.  Kal sat down with his back to the stone wall, listening to the wind rustle the ivy.  The leaves were red now, brushing his shoulders and hair.  The plot next to Kal was bare;  Kal let his left hand sift through the soil, feeling the dirt and small rocks trickle between his fingers.  His right hand was closed around cool metal and glass.

A whispering rustle, a thump;  Selina landed on the grass next to him.  Kal blinked.  "I wouldn't let anyone catch you doing that, little prince," said Selina.  "Getting your hands dirty like a common slave."

Kal patted the grass next to him and Selina cocked her head inquisitively.  "I was watching the moon," said Kal.  "I wouldn't mind some company."

Selina's lip curled, but she dropped to the grass next to him, keeping the green-tipped whip handy.  "Did you get tired of playing human?" she asked.

"Not really."

"I hope you didn't get too attached to it all," said Selina.  When Kal didn't respond, she continued, "You don't really think you'll be allowed to stay after we win, do you?"  She shook her head, making the ivy rustle.  "Even if you survive, there'll be no place on Earth for a Kryptonian.  You must know this."  Kal continued to look at the moon.  "Don't you care?" 

"Of course I do," said Kal.  The dirt was cool under his hand;  he crumbled a small clot of earth between his fingers.  "Of course I do."

He had the impression she was looking at him, but he kept his eyes on the moon, hanging silver in the sky.  After a while, she sighed.  "Do you remember the day I was collared?" she asked with the air of someone changing the topic.

"Yes."

"It was my seventh birthday.  I came to you crying because it threw my balance off, I couldn't do cartwheels any more.  Do you remember what you said to me?"

Kal nodded.  He remembered.

"You told me that I would always be free, in my heart."  Selina's voice was whittled with pain.  "In my heart.  You were so kind, so well-meaning."  She shook her head again.  "I looked at you and for the first time really realized what it meant that I was a slave and you were not."  She took a long, careful, shaking breath, then another.  Kal said nothing.  "What," she said sharply, "No helpful platitudes today?  No words of hope and encouragement to give me?"

"No," said Kal.  He turned and met her eyes, glinting green in the silver light.  "I'm sorry."

Her jaw tightened, and she reached out, placed cool fingers along the side of his face.  "Damn you," she whispered.

Then she stood, scooping her whip up, the swagger back in her posture.  "You look good with your hands in the dirt," she said.  She leapt to the top of the stone wall soundlessly.  "Almost human."

She was gone. 

Kal sat and looked at the moon.

"Master?"  He heard Bruce's soft whisper outside the kitchen garden, and then Bruce appeared in the archway, his figure limned by moonlight.  "Master, can't you sleep?"

Kal just looked at him and couldn't answer.

Bruce drew nearer, dropping to his haunches to look in Kal's eyes.  "You should be sleeping," he said.  "You need to be rested for tomorrow."

"Bruce," said Kal.  He couldn't seem to find any other words beyond the one that mattered.  "Bruce."

"Kal," whispered Bruce, almost too low to hear.

"I'm watching the moon.  Will you watch it with me?"

"Of course." 

Bruce settled onto the grass next to him, his back against the wall.  They looked up at the sky together for a time. 

"It's so beautiful," Kal said.  "I could fly there, but it would just be dead rock if I did.  It's only beautiful from far away."

He felt more than saw Bruce's attention shift.  "What are you holding?"  Bruce touched his right hand, and he curled his fingers around the cool glass and metal protectively. 

"Nothing."

"Don't say that."  Bruce pried the glasses free and looked at them for a long time, opening and closing them, the temples making small clicking noises.  "You kept them."

"I miss him."

"I know."

"I miss...his friends."

"I know."

Bruce leaned forward, close and then closer, and slipped the glasses onto Kal's face.  "He's here," Bruce said.  "We're both here."

Kal looked back at the moon.  Through the slight slimmering distortion of the glass it was even more lovely.  He put his empty hand back down on the earth.

After a moment, warm fingers rested on it, light but sure.

They sat together and watched the moon slide down the sky.  Kal felt the grass under his hand, the warmth of Bruce's touch over it.  He seemed to feel the earth beneath him, spinning them inexorably into the future, hurtling them through space, toward freedom or failure.

I won't fail you, he thought, unsure if he meant Bruce or the earth itself.

I won't fail.

: : :

Kal looked toward the head of the table to where a statuesque figure sat, dark hair in waves around her veiled face.  "Amazons always wear veils when we travel abroad," the princess had said in a low voice when he had asked.  "Our faces are not for general viewing."  Scorn dripped from her voice.

She deftly lifted a wine goblet to her lips behind the veil;  even her eyes were covered, so Kal couldn't tell if she was looking at him.  She seemed able to see through it, but it was opaque on this side. 

Kal found it unnerving.

Bruce was elegantly arranged on the cushion, all silk and silver chains, the very image of decorative submission.  Kal slipped him some food as Zor-El made small talk about with the princess about her journey.  The veiled face turned slightly toward him, and Kal had an impression of attention focused on him.

"Of course, we shall see no more of...that...when we are wed," she said in a voice like ice and steel.

"Of what?" 

"That thing at your feet," she said.

"Bruce?"  Kal felt like the floor was dropping out from under him. 

"Call it what you will, but I believe we all know what its purpose is, and it will not be seen in our household."

This wasn't how he had imagined his first conversation with his betrothed going.  "But he's--I mean--he's mine," he said, trying to get back into his persona as haughty Kryptonian and mostly sounding only pleading.

The princess made a sound in her throat that was almost a growl.  "It will be sold.  Or you shall turn it over to me and I shall find other employment for it."

"Now see here," Kal said, feeling indignation, fear, and guilt nearly throttling him, "You don't have the right--"

"I shall make its removal from this household a prerequisite for any further negotiations with the Amazons," she said.

"Now now," said Zor-El placatingly, "We'll talk about all this soon enough."  He shot Kal a warning look.  "It's not that big a deal, nephew."

Kal opened his mouth but couldn't come up with anything to say.  The princess's hands were clenched on the tablecloth, sinews and tendons standing out stark, her knuckles white.

The rest of the meal passed in silence.

: : :

"It might be better," Bruce said in Kal's quarters later.

Kal was jolted from his thoughts.  "What might?"

Bruce looked down at his hands.  "Leaving.  Being sold.  I can escape a new owner and go back to the Rockies.  It might be better than...being here."

Kal swallowed.  "If that's what you want."

A dry laugh.  "What does that have to do with anything?"

Kal was saved from having to respond by a sharp rap at the door.  He opened it to find the princess in her white formal gown, her face still veiled, hands fisted at her side like she yearned to be holding a weapon.  "You are a rude, spoiled child," she said without preamble, "And I have no desire to wed you beyond the benefits it might bring my people."  She entered the room, pushing him aside.  "Oh," she said.  "I intended to be kind and polite and nice, but I cannot, not when I see--"  She pointed at Bruce, standing with his eyes lowered.  "I will not live side by side with your pleasure slave," she spat.

"I'm sorry, but I can't--"

Kal's stammered statement seemed to goad the princess past bearing;  she took a deep breath and the veil flattened against her mouth.  With an irritated snarl she reached up and ripped off her veil, revealing a sternly lovely face, currently contorted with anger.  "You listen to me, you--you--Kryptonian," pointing a furious finger at him.  "I will not--"

Bruce's voice was full of shock:  "--Diana?" 
 
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Date: 2009-03-29 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dhfunk.livejournal.com
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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Date: 2009-03-29 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I am too...if I could just figure out exactly where it was going. :) Luckily I have the conversation with Diana to tide me over and get me started when I get to it...

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Date: 2009-03-29 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com
hee! Diana! :D I'm really hoping that it's a good thing that he knows her. *fingers crossed*

This part was so terribly sad. :( It was so wonderful when they were out traveling and meeting people - and Bruce got to be himself... this... ah man, I'm so sad for him. :( And Selina, too, really. I didn't much like her before, but she seemed a little more tame and, I dunno, like there's less hatred in her heart or something - if that makes any sense?

Bah...I'm all heartbroken for them now. :(

This said, I'm looking forward to more, because as sad as this was, this series is so beautifully written! <3

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Date: 2009-03-29 09:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
This part was so terribly sad. :( It was so wonderful when they were out traveling and meeting people - and Bruce got to be himself... this... ah man, I'm so sad for him.

I know, bringing them back was brutal. *sighs* I'm going to have to hope they get some time in between all the stuff going on in the next arc!

Selina...she really does like Kal and knows he's well-meaning. It's just not always enough, even if you want it to be.

Boy, this was kind of a sad ending to the arc, wasn't it? :0 There's some hope and promise, but yeah, no closure yet...

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Date: 2009-03-29 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skund.livejournal.com
Dun dun DUN!!! What a cliffhanger! What a chapter!

I feel so sorry for Clark, he really doesn't belong anywhere now. And for Bruce, for voluntarily shedding his freedom again. Indeed, what does what Bruce want have to do with anything?

And then Diana! OMG! :D Really looking forward to the next arc.

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Date: 2009-03-29 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I feel so sorry for Clark, he really doesn't belong anywhere now.

That's...hm, that's an interesting way of putting it, and sad, and actually quite true in canon in some ways as well. He's always suspended between two races, worse here than usual... a man without a country.

Indeed, what does what Bruce want have to do with anything?

He does get quite bitter about that at times. He'll do what he has to, but it's hurting him...and worse than he thought it would, too.

But Diana is awesome. :D I actually wrote a fair amount of the conversation that follows, but felt like it bogged down the end of the arc with two much new information, so it got put off. But she's fun to write. :)

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Date: 2009-03-29 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tilco-cat.livejournal.com
O_O!!! ... I suppose Kal will be able to keep Bruce now?
What a feisty princess Diana make XD (Just like Lois o_O) Poor Kal... all the women in his life are so... aggressive. At least Bruce is compliant to him when he have to XD .. and Bruce needs him too. Just purrfect for each other :3

Well done! :D I can't wait for the next arc either~~ OwO Darn cliffhanger~~ >o

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Date: 2009-03-29 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
What a feisty princess Diana make XD (Just like Lois o_O) Poor Kal... all the women in his life are so... aggressive.

This universe is fun for the women for me...mostly they don't take any crap from Kal just because he has a pretty face, although Kara does cut him some slack. :D

I have to start thinking about the next arc more carefully now, oh dear! I know the basic events but actually putting it all together...

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Date: 2009-03-29 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calcus.livejournal.com
Even if you survive, there'll be no place on Earth for a Kryptonian.

It's perhaps wrong that I hadn't thought of this. With such an outright overthrow of a majority over a minority, I suppose many of the Kryptonians will be slaughtered. The human caretakers as well. J'onn, Kara, Kal, all having to leave earth seems wrong somehow. I guess that's part of an AU though, we bring canon with us.

This return to 'reality' is very sad. The idea of working towards the destruction of your own people -- even when those people are, for lack of a better word, evil -- would be a horrible thing to bear. Kal's longing for Clark and for Bruce, for the Bruce he got to know, is heartrending.

I find it a little disturbing that Diana chooses to refer to Bruce as 'it'. I get why, mostly, but it still bothers me. :/ Her self-righteousness seems a little ridiculous to me considering what the Amazons have been complicit to and are now outright condoning, with the marriage. Still, it is so perfectly Diana.

Looking forward to the epilogue!

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Date: 2009-03-29 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
It's perhaps wrong that I hadn't thought of this. With such an outright overthrow of a majority over a minority, I suppose many of the Kryptonians will be slaughtered. The human caretakers as well. J'onn, Kara, Kal, all having to leave earth seems wrong somehow. I guess that's part of an AU though, we bring canon with us.

I honestly hadn't thought of it until recently myself. I hadn't really thought past winning (I don't thin Kal has much either), but yeah...Bruce has plans to try and keep bloodshed to a minimum, but there will be fatalities, and aliens won't be very welcome on Earth after. Kal's in a really difficult position...

Diana is fierce and furious, and I had a lot of fun writing her. I wrote out the whole conversation, but it bogged down the end of the arc too much to put it in this chapter, so...it moves along to the next arc! :D

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Date: 2009-03-29 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlvsclrk.livejournal.com
Such a beautiful chapter, so full of melancholy and love. Poor Kal, it seems that even if he wins, he'll lose. I loved that he beat Zor-El at the game for the first time when he wasn't even paying attention - something kinda Zen about that. And yay for Diana's arrival!

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Date: 2009-03-29 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Poor Kal, it seems that even if he wins, he'll lose.

He's a lonely figure in canon, and that's translating in interesting and odd ways in this AU for me. And I liked the touch of him winning the game when he wasn't trying...he surprised me as well as his uncle there. :)

Now I just have to figure out the last arc... @_@ Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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Date: 2009-03-29 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zenithjolt.livejournal.com
Brilliant, just brilliant.

Can't wait to read the rest! i love this AU so much :D

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Date: 2009-03-29 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm really enjoying writing it! Especially the female characters, somehow...maybe because they're not as constrained in their ability to express themselves as Kal and Bruce are here. :)

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Date: 2009-03-29 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hitokaji.livejournal.com
This part is so romantic with the two looking at the moon together. *melts away* ^___^

I specially love this line "I could fly there, but it would just be dead rock if I did. It's only beautiful from far away." Tis' true! :D

And we're going to have Diana too!? Yay!! XD

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Date: 2009-03-29 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
I specially love this line "I could fly there, but it would just be dead rock if I did. It's only beautiful from far away." Tis' true! :D

That was one of the last lines to go in there! [livejournal.com profile] damos was like, "So...why is Kal staring at the moon? What does it make him think of?" And that led to the line. :)

I like Diana in this universe, she's a hothead and rather haughty. :) Thank you for the comment!

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Date: 2009-03-29 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] confusedkayt.livejournal.com
ACK! Ack ack ack. Very coherent, I know. This just... Oh, this chapter twists the knife. Poor Kal. :( Poor Bruce. Poor Selina. Poor everybody, really. I just want to squeeze them all.

Diana is *fierce* here, in the RuPaul sense. I love it! And really, that would just be adding insult to injury, were the arrangement between Bruce and Kal what it appears to be... I am a bit surprised that Bruce didn't call that one and suggest he lurk elsewhere for the introduction dinner. Unless, of course, he (subconciously) wants to bait this princess who will be up in Kal's business.

Also... A dry laugh. "What does that have to do with anything?" OH BRUCE. This makes me want to listen to Jewel songs. This line just gutted me.

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Date: 2009-03-30 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Poor everybody, really. I just want to squeeze them all.

I know! It's an overall mess of a situation... *sighs* I really like Selina and Kara in this series, they're fun to write. :)

I am a bit surprised that Bruce didn't call that one and suggest he lurk elsewhere for the introduction dinner. Unless, of course, he (subconciously) wants to bait this princess who will be up in Kal's business.

He probably wanted to get a feel for her if possible... trying to figure out if it would be possible to work around her, and where her sympathies lay. But yes, the sight has goaded her a great deal. :)

I've got most of their conversation written, but need to figure out the rest of the arc! :(

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Date: 2009-03-29 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aclytie.livejournal.com
Diana! O isn't it priceless? I'm glad to see her, after all the angst of Kal that makes my heart break, her debut is almost a comic relief. :D Can't wait to see more of her and the dynamics of the trinity, you rock!

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Date: 2009-03-30 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Can't wait to see more of her and the dynamics of the trinity, you rock!

I wrote most of the following conversation and decided it had to get moved to the next arc rather than bog things down with new information, but she's fun to write and I look forward to tweaking and re-writing it. :) I have too many characters in this AU now and I'm not sure how I'm going to balance them all!

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Date: 2009-03-29 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com
Gah!! ~O_O~ Man, what a way to leave off the arc. I had no idea Kal was actually being betrothed to Diana, until they mentioned an alliance with the Amazons. That it was Diana just naturally followed. XD Of course, I was a bit shocked at how utterly rude she was. O_o There has to be a story there, though.

*applauds*

Eagerly awaiting the next arc!

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Date: 2009-03-30 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Of course, I was a bit shocked at how utterly rude she was. O_o There has to be a story there, though.

There always is with scenes like that. :) Now I just have to figure out what happens in the next arc! I know two events, but now to stitch them together...uh, can you tell I don't usually write anything terribly plotty? :D

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Date: 2009-03-29 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderer-owl.livejournal.com
Garden Scence is so beautiful. TT^TT

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Date: 2009-03-30 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks! I enjoy writing scenes in the El gardens, they're so pretty (as are the boys in them!)

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Date: 2009-03-29 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Last chapter, oh noes!! :(

But Bruce was seated at a cushion at his feet, and if Kal did anything so rash as tuck a flower behind his ear, he would merely cast his eyes down demurely. No insults, no gibes, just sweetness and docility.

But he would look very pretty! ...And, I suppose, he might insult him later? :p

Kal's hands itched suddenly to crush the flowers, to shatter the columns, to scatter the pieces of the game across the porch. Anything to break the cloying silence and give him back the astringency of Bruce's mocking voice.

*pets Kal carefully*

Kal somehow doubted that.

I do too!

Kal felt his breath catch. "I want to see it! I want to see all of it. Even the little I did see--" He remembered the gnarled forests, the rolling fields and scrublands, the mountains soaring into the sky, "--I want more. I want to know it all."

*pets Kal again*

"He heard my despair, my confusion, and rage and hope, and he came to me. He told me that I wasn't alone." Her smile was terribly sweet. "He didn't know it then, but I knew it right away, that I'd never be alone again with him in my life." She touched her hand to her heart again, gently. "Not even galaxies," she murmured.

*hugs Kara*

"Of course I do," said Kal. The dirt was cool under his hand; he crumbled a small clot of earth between his fingers. "Of course I do."

*pets Kal*

Kal looked back at the moon. Through the slight slimmering distortion of the glass it was even more lovely. He put his empty hand back down on the earth.

After a moment, warm fingers rested on it, light but sure.

They sat together and watched the moon slide down the sky. Kal felt the grass under his hand, the warmth of Bruce's touch over it. He seemed to feel the earth beneath him, spinning them inexorably into the future, hurtling them through space, toward freedom or failure.

I won't fail you, he thought, unsure if he meant Bruce or the earth itself.

I won't fail.


*huggles Kal and Bruce*

Bruce looked down at his hands. "Leaving. Being sold. I can escape a new owner and go back to the Rockies. It might be better than...being here."

*pets Bruce*

He opened it to find the princess in her white formal gown, her face still veiled, hands fisted at her side like she yearned to be holding a weapon.

I love that description of Diana, of her wanting to hold a weapon!

Bruce's voice was full of shock: "--Diana?"

Argh!!! Such a evil place to leave it!!! *pouts* I want to know what happens!!! *pouts again*

LOL, seriously, this has been a really awesome arc. I've really loved seeing Kal find Clark, and discover more about humans, and Bruce and Kal getting closer. I hope to see the next arc soon! :)

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Date: 2009-03-30 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
But he would look very pretty! ...And, I suppose, he might insult him later? :p

LOL, I like that idea! "Hm, maybe he'll insult me later and I'll feel better!" Uh, actually I've just started a fic along those lines a little bit so... LOL!

J'onn/Kara really surprised me in this series, lol. Even though I imagine her as Power Girl it isn't...one I would expect. :D

I love that description of Diana, of her wanting to hold a weapon!

I've talked to you a little bit about this Diana, she's very much a warrior and a lot of fun to write, yay!

I'm glad you liked the arc--it was probably my favorite just because I could advance the friendship a bit!--and thanks so much for reading and commenting! *hugs*

Part 1

Date: 2009-03-29 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
""There isn't much to tell, aunt. We--I--had a good trip. The spa was...very relaxing.""

Um ... Really (I know but man what kind of spas offer beat your slave type trip; I wouldn't want to know about)? Have they got a cover story for that? Or does Kal just get red?

"The brilliant blue flowers nodded slightly in the breeze. He felt the sudden urge to pick one, to take the cerulean flower and put it behind Bruce's ear, just to watch Bruce's eyes roll in annoyance and hear him scoff."

Hee. I love that impulse. Poor Bruce with the flowers.

"But Bruce was seated at a cushion at his feet, and if Kal did anything so rash as tuck a flower behind his ear, he would merely cast his eyes down demurely. No insults, no gibes, just sweetness and docility."

Yeh. Bummer.

"The healing bruises on Bruce's face were darker than the blue of the flowers."

Poor boys. What was Alfred's reaction? How much does he know?

"Zor cocked his head and looked at Kal in silence for a while. "You're still sulking about the marriage, aren't you?""

They are so bloody lucky here.

"An eloquent shrug. "Does it matter?""

I love how you show a lack of concern about people as individuals.

""Of course," said Kal. "Maybe I'll even learn her name.""

Hee.

"As he waited for his uncle's move, he let his hand rest on Bruce's head, letting dark hair slip between his fingers, caressing. He felt more than heard Bruce's small sigh at the touch, a tiny exhalation; the fingers tightened on his thigh briefly."

Eeeeeee! I'd quote all of the paragraph but it was rather big (still is). I just want to say I love it. And it obviously is an advantage of their positions here (as opposed to the "human" society). Although more of a disadvantagee too (oppressor and oppressed i.e. in theory). By that I mean they are allowed to touch each other for comfort in the name of slave and master. But don't allow that as human and "human" (because of the reality of one of them). So silly but understandable.

"He shifted one of his stones across the board and Zor-El looked at it for a long time. He sat back in his chair slowly. "You win," he said."

Hee. So the secret of winning is mutual touching with Bruce? Love it. If only everything was doable that way.

""He came to me," Kara whispered, as if she'd never spoken of it to anyone. "He heard my despair, my confusion, and rage and hope, and he came to me. He told me that I wasn't alone.""

Eeeeeee! Hugs Zhon/J'onn and Kara. Although you're making me wish Kryptonians had some sort of bond so Kal and Bruce could be that close (in touch with one another).

"Bruce was asleep on the floor at the foot of the bed, curled up in a pile of blankets."

OK they still don't trust each other to not seep molest the other? Especially Bruce? I mean can't he get them together in the name of pragmatism or what? If they had to they could sleep with their heads at the opposite ends of the bed. I did that as a child with sleepovers (with other same sex children; totally innocently). Or wrap one of them in a sheet like a mummy with their head uncovered. I do assume Kal doesn't kick 'cos that could be dangerous. Silly men.

"Her jaw tightened, and she reached out, placed cool fingers along the side of his face. "Damn you," she whispered."

Must admit I loved that conversation. For the past and the present. Plus the hinted at potential exile he faces for doing the right thing.

""Don't say that." Bruce pried the glasses free and looked at them for a long time, opening and closing them, the temples making small clicking noises. "You kept them.""

Eeeeeee!

"Bruce leaned forward, close and then closer, and slipped the glasses onto Kal's face. "He's here," Bruce said. "We're both here.""

Hugs them both but especially Kal/Clark.

"After a moment, warm fingers rested on it, light but sure."

Eeeeeee! I love the touching.

"I won't fail you, he thought, unsure if he meant Bruce or the earth itself.

I won't fail."


Hugs Kal. I know you won't. Plus luckily there's no 900 year old Jedi with a cave tainted with the Dark Side of the Force to test you. :P

More to come.

Angeloz

Re: Part 1

Date: 2009-03-30 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Um ... Really (I know but man what kind of spas offer beat your slave type trip; I wouldn't want to know about)? Have they got a cover story for that? Or does Kal just get red?

I doubt they'd care or maybe even notice that Bruce's face was beaten...I suspect it happens all the time when humans are too slow with service and so on. However, this time Bruce was supposedly left in Kara's care while Kal left. Not that it changes much, they'd just be assuming Kara whacked him, but sadly they don't really even notice.

Poor boys. What was Alfred's reaction? How much does he know?

Good question, since Alfred is mostly "don't ask, don't tell" about Bruce's secret life with the resistance. But I'm sure Bruce put him at ease about it.

By that I mean they are allowed to touch each other for comfort in the name of slave and master. But don't allow that as human and "human" (because of the reality of one of them). So silly but understandable.


Yeah! I'm really finding interesting the different layers of freedom and touching--they can touch when they're not free, and they're free when they're not touching, but they understandably want both.

OK they still don't trust each other to not seep molest the other? Especially Bruce? I mean can't he get them together in the name of pragmatism or what?

Hm, it's complicated in both their minds, I think. Kal feels/knows that even suggesting they sleep together would be crossing boundaries, and Bruce...I think Bruce doesn't really trust himself, more than he doesn't trust Kal.

Plus luckily there's no 900 year old Jedi with a cave tainted with the Dark Side of the Force to test you. :P

*snickers* He does kind of remind me of Luke in Empire Strikes Back, now that you mention it! Passionate but not very tempered yet...

Part 2

Date: 2009-03-29 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
""Call it what you will, but I believe we all know what its purpose is, and it will not be seen in our household.""

I know you might not answer. But I'm wondering what the heck is going on with the Amazons. 'Cos I thought wasn't there some sort of oppression and/or slavery in their past so that's why they left mans world. Unless they're involved in covert freeing of everyone. I could believe that. Even if it includes those from the former oppressing sex to be free. So in order to move more freely they get married to the oppressors? Or her plan? I'm not sure what's happening on Paradise Island. Did the Kryptonians conquer them? Actually I guess since they had a history of being enslaved that's why it'd be a bigger abomination. Especially sex slavery. For many it'd be rape. But ironically not always. Even in our world. Probably Sally Hemmings for instance. It was the only way for some to be together. As it was illegal to marry. But not to be slave and master. I found it weird that in some states it would be illegal for Obama's parents to be married and it was the 20th Century. Then again Aboriginals weren't counted as citizens in Australia until 1967. But it was one of the few referendums passed I'm happy to say and I think it got over 90% support. But still ludicrous it took so long.

"Bruce looked down at his hands. "Leaving. Being sold. I can escape a new owner and go back to the Rockies. It might be better than...being here."

Kal swallowed. "If that's what you want.""


Silly boys. Though I understand why Kal wouldn't want to seem to force him into anything (as if he could although would Kal looking like a kicked puppy work on Bruce? I suspect it could).

""I intended to be kind and polite and nice, but I cannot, not when I see--" She pointed at Bruce, standing with his eyes lowered. "I will not live side by side with your pleasure slave," she spat."

Doesn't sound conquered. Also isn't Paradise Island hidden with magic and Kryptonians are very susceptible. So they were hidden when the planet was overtaken? So what's going on? Can't say? Although I like the wrong assumptions going on. Especially as the silly boys haven't even done anything. And it's not like they can't but it's a little thing called morals and doing the right thing (especially Kal). Although sometimes I say stuff that. Some things are more important than other considerations. Especially if involving adult consential loving relationships. Poor boys.

"Bruce's voice was full of shock: "--Diana?" "

Hee. So threesome? Without the sex. If so I hope she'll insist on another bed so there's no sleeping on the floor. Although who will use it? All due to swapping around?

Then there's the little matter on how they met i.e. Bruce and Diana (for sleeping arrangements are very important ;). 'Cos he didn't find the Island and lived did he? As he's not Steve Trevor. Or does he know Steve and met her through him? Or is there no Steve? I guess you'll tell or the next installment will. I look forward to it a lot.

Angeloz

Re: Part 2

Date: 2009-03-30 12:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
The short answer with the Amazons: They're currently independent from the Kryptonians (as is Atlantis), and in an uneasy truce. Opinion on the Kryptonians is mixed--some believe it's a punishment on man's world for the harms they've done in their turn, others are passionately anxious to help humans. Most are basically pragmatic isolationists, however, which includes the Queen for now.

Hee. So threesome? Without the sex. If so I hope she'll insist on another bed so there's no sleeping on the floor. Although who will use it? All due to swapping around?

No threesome, as things are already hard enough for me to balance between Kal and Bruce without throwing another partner into the mix. :) But on how Bruce knows Diana I am going to keep quiet for now. :D And now I have to finish planning the next arc! I have two big events I know about and have to figure out what connects them, lol... Thanks for all the awesome feedback on this arc, you gave me lots of stuff to think about, which is always helpful!

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Date: 2009-03-29 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juniper617.livejournal.com
You've brought this arc to a beautiful, somewhat melancholy closure. That very last line, "Diana?" gave me a little hope; perhaps Diana has been involved with the resistance. Otherwise why would Bruce be on a first name basis with her?

Loved seeing Diana enter with her 'Warrior Princess' mentality intact. She's got a lot to get her mind around now; she's going to have to learn some degree of diplomacy and even dishonesty, if she's going to get along in Kryptonian!Man's World. Whether she supports the Kryptonians or the resistance.

I have no doubt the next arc will be equally brilliant. You never fail -- just go with your instincts. ^_^

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Date: 2009-03-30 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Loved seeing Diana enter with her 'Warrior Princess' mentality intact.

I'm definitely channeling some Xena with this take on Diana! She's been very fun to write so far (I finished the conversation but decided to cut it from this arc because it was basically a huge dump of brand-new information that brought everything to a crawl...)

And indeed, Bruce knowing Diana's name is probably a tip-off they've interacted in the past...and that he's willing to blurt it out is an indication he trusts her. :D

Oh, and thanks so much for the encouragement! I'm starting to feel more comfortable with the interactions and relationships...now I just have to kick the plot into shape. *grin*

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Date: 2009-03-29 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juniper617.livejournal.com
Huh, it just occurred to me now that if the Kryptonians are driven off of Earth -- where will they go? And yet I can see how the humans would feel about allowing super powered ex-conquerors to live among them. Well, that will be interesting. Like any post-colonial experience, only magnified because of the super powers thing. Ireland meets Outer Space.

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Date: 2009-03-29 08:29 pm (UTC)
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Awesome! DIANA!!! :)

Loved Kal subconsciously beating Zor-El, his talk with Selina, Bruce coming to him in the gardens and moon-gazing, and Diana!

Why is she so angry? That will be interesting to find out! I suspect she hates the Kryptonians and could very well be a member of the Resistance, considering her people's history. Why did she refer to Bruce as 'it'? A cover for abolitionist sentiments? Bruce must have been veiled or she just didn't see his face at dinner.

I can see a marriage working if Diana is a Resistance member. I could see a threesome! :) But I could also see a marriage of necessity, friendship developing, and ultimately Bruce and Kal together. And Diana? With her taste for blonds (twice in canon!), I'm sure she can find someone! ;)

The situation with the Amazons will no doubt be told in the next arc. :)

If Kal must leave Earth after Victory, would Bruce go with him? An interesting question! Or are they just doomed to live galaxies apart but in each other's hearts as Kara says?

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Date: 2009-03-30 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Why is she so angry? That will be interesting to find out! I suspect she hates the Kryptonians and could very well be a member of the Resistance, considering her people's history. Why did she refer to Bruce as 'it'? A cover for abolitionist sentiments? Bruce must have been veiled or she just didn't see his face at dinner.

She saw him all right, but she's still pissed. However, you're right that she's not exactly pro-slavery (not Diana, of all people!)

If Kal must leave Earth after Victory, would Bruce go with him? An interesting question! Or are they just doomed to live galaxies apart but in each other's hearts as Kara says?

I hadn't even been thinking about that until around the middle of this arc, when DaMO asked me why I thought getting rid of the Kryptonians would make life easier for Kal and Bruce, considering he would not longer be welcome on Earth. So, uh...yeah. Kind of a problem!

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Date: 2009-03-29 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjunkie.livejournal.com
That was a beautiful scene when our two boys were remembering Clark. And I love how Kal keeps telling Bruce to do what he wants: Kal, darling, if you only knew...

Interesting introduction to Diana. I look forward to seeing more of her as long as she doesn't impede the Clark/Bruce love...They've already been in separate bedrooms for far too long!

Ha. I jest. Maybe. A little...

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Date: 2009-03-30 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Interesting introduction to Diana. I look forward to seeing more of her as long as she doesn't impede the Clark/Bruce love...They've already been in separate bedrooms for far too long!

I do solemnly swear she will be no impediment! She's not interested in either of them in this world. :) Which makes her very fun to write for me!

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Date: 2009-03-30 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com
You are really an awesome writer! This chapter was absolutely brilliant! So much emotions! I felt so sad for Kal. His dialogues with Kara and Selina, watching the moon with Bruce, missing Clark and his friends. It was so emotionally written.

And the meeting with the princess – the ending! I know, I thought it was supposed to be Diana. But what kind of purpose he has with Bruce?!
"I will not live side by side with your pleasure slave," she spat.
Poor Kal – that sounds so harsh. *hugs him tight*

There were so many things making my heart ache for my lovely Kal. But – you wrote it all so wonderfully.
Thank you very much for sharing this amazing and touching chapter.
I’m eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Date: 2009-03-31 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
This was a tough chapter for Kal, coming back to reality after his time away. But...he's committed to the cause and knows it all has a purpose.

Poor Kal – that sounds so harsh. *hugs him tight*

Diana's not a flexible woman here. :) But she's very fun to write! She's not going to be terribly patient with Kal, I'm afraid...but Bruce will defend him. :D

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Date: 2009-03-30 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dm-wyatt.livejournal.com
LOL!

The plot thickens... I know I haven't been commenting, but I have been reading, sorry for that, but I had to delurk.

I LOVE that Diana is being brought in here, so I'm guessing that Bruce won't be sold now?

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Date: 2009-03-31 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
The perfect icon! :) Diana has been a lot of fun to write, and I've got most of the conversation written, I just need to polish it up (and, uh, figure out the rest of the arc...) I think it's unlikely Bruce will be sold. :)

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Date: 2009-03-30 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] batfan-sarah.livejournal.com
woah - how does bruce know her?! oh i'm so very excited to see more of this. i'm surprised at how vehement diana is as well. and i loved the bit about the blue flowers and selina watching the moon with kal.

can't wait for the next arc!!!!!

bwee!

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Date: 2009-03-31 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
i'm surprised at how vehement diana is as well.

She's quite angry here! Angry, angry woman. :) And fun to write!

I hope not to wait too long for the last arc, but it's still gestating a bit. Thanks for the encouragement! *hugs*

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Date: 2009-03-30 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] longhairedlady.livejournal.com
Diana! So happy to see her here, I love how you showed just her absolute inability to cope with Kal owning a slave. All the trinity's together now, can't wait to see where they take things! (Also, I love how sappy Kal is at heart, with his glasses and the moon and his omigosh cuteness.)

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Date: 2009-03-31 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Diana! So happy to see her here, I love how you showed just her absolute inability to cope with Kal owning a slave.

I do believe Diana is my character for channeling all of my frustration with the system. :) And mushy Kal makes me terribly happy, the sentimental boy. :D Glad you liked!

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Date: 2009-03-31 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snake-easing.livejournal.com
Diana for the mother-loving win!

Was also great to see Selina talk to Kal that way. Really great. Those things needed to be said.

Diana better than anything, however. Trinity threesome would be the best thing ever, y/y?

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Date: 2009-03-31 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Selina's a hard one for me to balance. Forgiveness is not really an option with her, although she's fond of Kal...but fondness (and good intentions) are not enough.

Diana better than anything, however. Trinity threesome would be the best thing ever, y/y?

Oh man, I'm having a hard enough time keeping the duo? in balance this time around, a trio would probably spin everything totally out of range. :) But I'm having fun with her as well--the women in this series are some of my favorites to write, maybe because they're more passionate and less restrained then the men. I blame this to some extent on your story. This is a good thing. :)

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Date: 2009-03-31 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] genclay.livejournal.com
hehe, so meny people saying so much,

I'm just going to go with

'You and this, make me happy :)'

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Date: 2009-03-31 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks. *hugs* It means a lot...
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