You know, I really love this fic. I'm enjoying this more than I've enjoyed just about any fic in a long time. I saw that you'd posted a new chapter and said, "Oooh! I'll save it for after I've finished packing!" And then I started reading it anyway, because I am weak. So weak. It's okay, though, because I've been reading every chapter twice, so I'll save the re-read for after I've finished packing. :D
The interaction with Selina was fantastic! I love Bruce and Clark's chemistry, and how well you describe each move, making it clear what's happening without bogging down the story. It's really impressive.
"It's a fist bump," Bruce explained when Clark blinked at him. "I've been reliably informed it's a ritualistic gesture of respect performed by partners to express solidarity."
A snort of laughter escaped Clark before he could help himself. "I'm in an angle with Wikipedia," he said. But he extended his fist and gently bumped knuckles with Bruce.
*snickers*
I am waiting so eagerly for the next chapter, I can't even tell you! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! ^_^
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Date: 2013-03-19 11:39 pm (UTC)The interaction with Selina was fantastic! I love Bruce and Clark's chemistry, and how well you describe each move, making it clear what's happening without bogging down the story. It's really impressive.
"It's a fist bump," Bruce explained when Clark blinked at him. "I've been reliably informed it's a ritualistic gesture of respect performed by partners to express solidarity."
A snort of laughter escaped Clark before he could help himself. "I'm in an angle with Wikipedia," he said. But he extended his fist and gently bumped knuckles with Bruce.
*snickers*
I am waiting so eagerly for the next chapter, I can't even tell you! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! ^_^