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mithen ([personal profile] mithen) wrote2009-04-19 08:04 pm

Ficlet: Hot Steel

Title:  Hot Steel
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Notes: Written hastily but joyously for the S/B Kink Meme.  Prompt:  outdoor sex - specifically the hood of the Kent farm's pickup truck.
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  The day is hot, and so is Clark.
Word Count: 513


"Clark, anyone could come along and--"

His fly was unbuttoned before he finished the sentence and shortly after that he'd forgotten how he was planning to end it.  "Uh," Bruce muttered as Clark dragged him across the lawn of the Kent farmhouse, the blazing summer heat shimmering around them.  "Where are we going?"

"Not far."  With a smile, Clark hopped onto the hood of his father's pickup truck, his legs dangling in front of the fender.  He unzipped his fly slowly and shimmied out of his jeans, letting them slide to his knees.  Beneath he was wearing white cotton briefs--the kind that Bruce found dorkily unattractive until recently.  "Bruce," Clark said when his lover still hesitated, "My parents aren't going to be home from Chicago until Thursday.  There's no one here but us.  And I've always wanted to do this."  He kicked his boots and then his jeans off.  "Come here."

Bruce slid his hands under the Smallville t-shirt, feeling Clark's muscles hard under his hands.  Clark gathered him into a kiss--and Bruce yelped as one of his hands touched the hood of the truck.  The metal was blisteringly hot in the August sun, waves of heat rising from it.  "Damn.  Hot," Bruce said, putting his hand to his mouth unconsciously.

"Why, thank you," said Clark, hooking his hands into the waistband of his briefs and sliding them down slowly.  Soon he was wearing nothing but a t-shirt, invulnerable flesh resting squarely on the searing metal, smiling.  He rolled over onto his stomach, pressing against the heated steel, stretching his arms out like a cat and lifting his hips invitingly.  "Mmmm," he murmured.  "The lube is in my jeans pocket.  What are you waiting for?"

It seemed a fairly good question.

Bruce kept his hands on Clark's back, feeling heat rising in ripples all around them as he pushed in, as Clark made that little hitching sound he always did at that moment.  Bruce felt sweat trickling down his face, shook his head;  the drops sizzled briefly when they touched the hood.  He was preternaturally aware that Clark's body was all that was shielding him from the blazing metal, standing between him and incandescence.  The thought made prickles of arousal chase all through him, and he rocked forward hard, thrusting deep into Clark, into the heart of the heat of his alien love. 

The truck dipped and creaked slightly with their movement, and at another time Bruce might have found that amusing.  But now the sound of metal only seemed to inflame him more, everything was hot iron and steely heat, molten metal in his spine, blazing through him as he shuddered and spent himself.

Clark rolled over again as Bruce pulled out, stretching across the hood like a centerfold.  He sat up as Bruce collected himself and pulled him close.

Clark's chest radiated heat like a brand, like a sun, and Bruce let the warmth penetrate him, reaching deep.  He was soaked with sweat, panting, but in that brief moment he wanted nothing more than to immolate himself in Clark's arms forever.

[identity profile] twinsarein.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I read that a few days ago, when it was still anonymous. It's so good. I loved the heat theme you have throughout and I liked how hot the hood of the truck was, with Clark just laying casually on top. Such an awesome image. Such a hot story - and I mean that in more than the literal sense. *g*

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* Thanks! I really love writing stories where things seem kind of normal, but then there's something about either Bruce or Clark that turns things sideways. :) Glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] rjunkie.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark is such a saucy little minx! :D Bruce is a lucky, lucky man.

And I agree with [livejournal.com profile] twinsarein, the heat element really added something to an already appealing prompt.

This was fantastic. My brain is melty.


[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark was really enjoying himself here! I didn't mention it, but I think he wasn't bothering to wear his glasses...Clark on the farm without glasses is very different in my brain than Clark in Metropolis with glasses...a lot more sure of himself and his sexiness, I guess. :) And very ready to have fun!

[identity profile] zenithjolt.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice imagery 8) very, very sexy,

'"Damn. Hot," Bruce said,putting his hand to his mouth unconsciously. "Why, thank you," said Clark,'

--Lol, cheeky boy! Loved this, marvelous work!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark was surprisingly cheeky here! He didn't feel like being shy at the moment. :) He's very fun to write that way, too...

[identity profile] skund.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, awesome! That was you? That was my prompt. XD Totally love the way you ran with it. Very, very hot.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, thanks! I'm delighted I got the chance to write a prompt for you! *hugs*
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[identity profile] ctbn60.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
What a VERY nice way to wake up this morning! Hot very HOT!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Good morning to you as well! *grin* It was a fun way to spend an evening writing it!

[identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm! :) yes, this was definitely hot. hot, and sexy.

yum!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, it's been a lot of fun to scan the prompts and see if any bunnies hop out. :)

[identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Seriously! I keep going back and looking and...I really have to stop myself from trying to write something for over half of them. *giggles*

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Donnnnn't stop yourself! *waves carrots temptingly*

[identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*grabs the carrots and runs*

(there's...uh...at least one story coming. lol!)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Yayyyy! The more the happier! (I'm working on another, lol!)

[identity profile] carolandtom.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
This was very hot, in every sense of the word! Everything is hot in this story: the day, the truck, the sex, the writing and, of course, Clark. I love how much hotness you are able to produce in such a short story! A remarkable piece of work!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I really love finding something unusual about either of the two that turns a smut scene on its side a bit, so I had a lot of fun with this one. :)

[identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh. O_O

I absolutely loved this when I read it over at the kink meme. It's, well, HOT. XD Loved how you showed Clark's invulnerability with him sitting on the searing hot hood. Very well done. ^_~

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Thanks! I'm finding the kink meme a lot of fun to look at and ponder, there are some awesome prompts. Glad you enjoyed!

[identity profile] quiet--tiger.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Clark burning himself, only not burning himself because he's all invulnerable. And Bruce losing himself in the hotness, literal and figurative. Sexy!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I discovered the limits of the English language's synonyms for "heat" in this one, that's for sure. It was a lot of fun to turn over in my head and play with. :)

[identity profile] ava-jamison.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Left you fb on the meme, but just have to say again: That was incredibly fabulous!

Gorgeous! Perfect!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 12:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks! It was a lot of fun to write a little bit of happy smut. :)

[identity profile] jlvsclrk.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I never thought this was yours when I saw it earlier but I love, love, love it. My favorite bit is Clark casually lounging on the truck that is too hot for Bruce to touch.

He was preternaturally aware that Clark's body was all that was shielding him from the blazing metal, standing between him and incandescence. The thought made prickles of arousal chase all through him, and he rocked forward hard, thrusting deep into Clark, into the heart of the heat of his alien love.

*Sighs* So beautiful.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, thanks! Clark was so relaxed and happy and willing to be both alien and horny at the same time, it was a lot of fun to write. :)

[identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW, that was totally awesome!

The day is hot, and so is Clark.
Just reading the summary line I was sure, this story was going to be hot. And Clark was wonderful in this story. I'm glad he could enjoy those moments with Bruce. Amazing story! :)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* I always like showing them having a good time for a little bit and just relaxing! Yay for hotness! :) Glad you enjoyed...
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[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2009-04-19 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, blazing hotness in all possible ways! :)

Bruce's princely self coming out as he once considered plain white cotton briefs dorkably unattractive! ;)

Wonderful use of the heat imagery and the saucy prompt!

I really liked that detail of Bruce thinking about the only thing between him and searing heat is Clark's body. Yum! ;)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks Brady! I couldn't resist the prompt--I've definitely had a thing for Smallville-based sex lately. :) Clark can really relax and enjoy himself there, somehow...
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[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2009-04-20 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark's always at his most relaxed at home! I love writing him there. :)

I checked out the meme. I noticed that new prompts keep getting added. Cool! Maybe something will strike my fancy. :)

[identity profile] cmer.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god, this was unbelievably hot! I definitely felt the irresistible heat from Clark in your writing, it was so good, Jen! <3

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 02:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Whee, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] crimsonquills.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, hot in more than one sense. *g* (I'm sure only half a dozen people said that already!)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* I'm glad you liked it! I'd forgotten how much fun it is to write just a bit of porny fluff, yay!

[identity profile] juniper617.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oof. I'm sweating! *attempts to fan self with laptop computer; limited success*

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! You need a nice light laptop for that. :) Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh.

That was so blisteringly hot! Mmmm... Clark spread out over a truck... *drools*

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* I loved the image and couldn't resist it! :)
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[identity profile] awils1.livejournal.com 2009-04-22 11:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this takes me to 40 degree heat with better company than last time! Well done!

*resumes state of drooling*