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mithen ([personal profile] mithen) wrote2009-04-08 09:35 am

FIC: Serious Games

Title:  Serious Games
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Continuity:  Toonverse (specifically before the JLU episode "Starcrossed," in which Flash learns Batman is Bruce Wayne.)
Notes: The fourth and probably final installation in the series "Game, Set, and Matches," in which Clark develops unsavory connections to Matches Malone.
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex, some rough roleplaying.
Summary: Clark goes to the Manor under cover of night and surprises a playboy in bed.
Word Count: 3500

"I'm bored," said Flash, a bit redundantly since his super-speed pacing around the Watchtower's observation deck was making Superman dizzy. 

"We should be glad it's a slow night," said Superman.

"Uh-huh, yeah, great," said Flash.  "How's it going?" he asked, leaning over Batman, who was on his back on the floor, head and torso buried in the monitors.  From within the computer came intermittent sparking noises.  Three of the dozen monitors were currently showing only snow.

"Not bad.  It would be going faster if you weren't asking me every five minutes."

Flash sighed, then picked up a remote.  "Well, let's see what's on the news."  He flipped around at a breakneck pace for a bit, then stopped.  "Oh, Gossip Town," he said.  "I love this show."

"--had the pleasure of interviewing Bruce Wayne this morning," Vicki Vale was saying.  "And now I get to share that interview with you, our loyal viewers."

"Oh, this should be good," said Flash.  "This Wayne guy's got more money than God, but he's a total moron.  Vale loves having him on, he's always a total scream."

"Oh?"  Clark said nervously, looking over at Batman, still deep in the guts of the computer.

"Oh yeah, he's hysterical?  A bit light in the loafers.  Always good for a laugh."  Wally sat down and watched the television avidly.

On the screen, Bruce Wayne was sitting in a comfortable chair, his legs crossed, wearing a lavender sweater.  Vale asked him about some of his latest charity work, and Bruce answered in a careless drawl, his hands waving languidly.  "All right," said Vale, "Let's get to the good stuff.  Are you seeing anyone regularly right now?"

Bruce's eyes glinted.  "Oh Vicki, I'm far too complicated a man to ever limit myself to one person."

Flash snorted.  "Complicated?  That guy?"

"No," Bruce was going on, "I'm seeing a variety of fascinating people.  There's the country boy with the sweet smile that I've corrupted, the brilliant writer in Metropolis who won my heart..."  He leaned forward, tapping Vale's arm and lowering his voice to a mock-whisper.  "Why Vicki, I'm even seeing a member of the superhero community sometimes.  And he is yummy, let me tell you!"  He fanned himself dramatically as Vicki's eyebrows arched.

"So...will we be seeing you at the premiere of the new production of La Boheme this Friday?  All of Gotham's glitterati seem to be planning on making it."

"Friday night?"  Bruce's smile was slow and lascivious and sent a chill all the way down Clark's spine and to much more private regions.  "I'm afraid I've got plans for Friday night.  Plans I'm very much looking forward to.  The world will have to make do without me, I'm afraid."

"Can you believe that guy?  'Dating a superhero.' As if.  Like any of us would be interested in someone like that." scoffed Flash. 

"Friday night...show the billionaire nancy-boy a good time...he likes it kinda rough."  The phrases from Matches's note to Clark rang in Superman's ears so he could hardly hear the Flash.  "Uh," he said vaguely, trying not to dwell on images of Bruce naked and pliant beneath him.  Or maybe not so pliant.  Bucking against his grip, panting a little, grinding...

"He's from Gotham.  Maybe he's dating you, huh, Bats?"

Superman almost yelped as he realized Batman had emerged from his work and was standing right behind him, looking up at the image of Bruce Wayne on the screen in his lavender sweater.  "Impossible," grated Batman.

"Yeah, I know," said Flash.  "What a brainless himbo."  He shook his head in disgust.  "Gonna make some coffee.  Be right back."  And he was gone.

There was a moment's silence as Clark and Batman watched Bruce Wayne on the screen, his head tilted back and laughing, his eyes jaded and knowing.  Clark angled a little closer to Batman.  "Actually, I think he's very attractive."

"You do?"  Batman sounded honestly surprised.

"Definitely.  Look at those eyes.  That's a man who knows what he wants, for all his teasing."

"And just what do you think he wants?"

Clark lowered his voice a bit more.  "I think he just needs someone to take him in hand, show him who's boss.  He wants someone to set some limits, force him to behave.  And I think he'd behave very well in bed for the right man."

Batman was staring at the screen, seemingly lost in thought.  He took a long, slightly shaky breath.  "Tell me more," he said, his voice very low.  "Tell me."  His hands were clenched in the black silk of his cape.

"He's got a beautiful voice," Superman noted, keeping his voice nearly clinical, just the slightest bit of lust darkening it.  "I think he'd love to be driven into screaming his lover's name as he got fucked."

Batman made a small sound that might have been shocked disapproval at Superman's coarse language, or might have been a different kind of reaction entirely.

"Coffee!" announced Flash, carefully holding three paper cups, and Superman moved away from Batman's side to check the monitors.  Flash held out a cup to Batman, but Batman ignored him entirely, staring into space, black cloth still tight in his fists.  "Yo, Bats?"

"No time for coffee," Batman said brusquely, brushing Flash aside.  "I've got work to do."  He strode out of the observation deck, his breath a bit fast, his cape swirling around him.

"What a killjoy," said Flash, handing Superman a cup and draining Batman's in a quick gulp, then starting on his own.  "That's a man who has no idea how to have a good time."

Superman hid his smile in the cup.  "He does seem that way, doesn't he?"

: : :

Friday night.  Clark made his way toward the back door of Wayne Manor, dressed in a black turtleneck and slacks.  The glasses were off.  He wasn't sure exactly who he was right now:  he wasn't exactly Clark Kent, he wasn't Kal-El, and he sure as hell wasn't Superman.

All the lights were off in the Manor;  it loomed, dark and impressive, against the starry sky. 

The back door was unlocked, as Matches had promised it would be.  Clark slipped inside.  There was a heartbeat on the third floor, Bruce's bedroom.  It skipped, stuttered at the sound of the door opening two floors below, then evened out into a slightly-faster-than-normal pace.

Clark made his way through the darkened halls, across the elaborate Persian rugs, and to Bruce Wayne's bedroom door.  He paused outside for a moment, then pushed the heavy oak door open and went inside.

The room was dominated by a massive four-poster bed in dark wood.  Black silk draperies hung from it, not quite concealing the figure lying apparently fast asleep in the middle of its vastness, burgundy cloth pooled around him like blood.  The silk rose and fell with his slow breaths, and his eyes were closed.

Clark moved to an armchair on the far wall, facing the foot of the bed, and sat down, still unable to tear his eyes from the sleeping man.  Bruce's hair was tousled, dark strands disarranged on the pillow.  One bare shoulder was outside the sheets, pale skin and corded muscle.  Everything about him looked completely relaxed, vulnerable in sleep, only the tiniest flutter to his heart-rate betraying that he knew full well he was being watched.

He never had the chance to really watch Bruce, Clark realized.  The other man was always in motion, always in flux, never at rest.  Clark stared and couldn't seem to get enough:  the dark-winged eyebrows, the curve of the hand on the coverlet, the lips relaxed and slightly-parted, the very faintest of smiles on them, as if he were dreaming of something pleasant.  Clark stared, devouring Bruce with his eyes.  A sweet, slow heat was building in his body;  not the sharp flash of lust he usually felt around Matches or Batman, but a deep, liquid burn rising.  He sat, feeling desire simmering in him, transforming his body with slow arousal, the tightening in his groin a pleasure not yet demanding release.

"Mr. Wayne," he finally whispered.

Bruce's eyes snapped open and he stared around the dim room wildly until his eyes fell on Clark.  He pulled the silk sheets up to cover himself in an almost comically prim movement.  "Who the hell are you?" he gasped.  "Get out of here!"

Clark tried to keep from smiling--and then smiled anyway, a slow and assessing smile.  "Matches sent me," he said.

Bruce tossed his head.  "I don't know what you're talking about.  Breaking and entering is a crime, you know--"

"--I didn't break and enter.  The door was unlocked.  And Matches told me you wanted me here."  Clark leaned forward, putting his elbows on his knees.  "You know Matches Malone, don't you, Mr. Wayne?"

Bruce seemed to relax just the tiniest bit, his grip on the sheets slackening ever so slightly.  "Matches Malone is a horrid, horrid little man," he announced indignantly.

"Oh, I beg to differ about the little," said Clark with just a touch of a leer in his voice;  unbelievably, Bruce cast his eyes down and looked flustered, almost blushing.  "And despite your protests, Mr. Wayne, I'm afraid I won't be leaving here tonight without having my way with you.  Because Matches Malone told me to come here and give you a good time.  And I always do whatever Mr. Malone tells me to do."

Bruce suddenly leaned over to the nightstand and pressed a button on it.  "Alfred!  Alfred!  Come here at once!" he cried.  "There's a strange man here threatening me!"

Clark found himself on his feet, feeling rather alarmed.  He certainly didn't want to deal with Alfred... 

Then Bruce's shoulders slumped dramatically.  "Oh dear," he murmured, "I've given Alfred the night off.  And the boys are both out of town."  He raised limpid eyes to Clark's.  "It appears I am utterly at your mercy, you wicked brute.  There is not a soul in the house to hear my desperate cries."  With a slight shrug, he reached for a jade bowl of sweets on the nightstand and picked out a chocolate-covered cherry.  He bit a hole in the dark chocolate and slowly lapped up the oozing liqueur, keeping one eye on Clark.  His tongue darted into the chocolate, rolling the cherry around inside its shell, prodding at its sweetness.

Clark sat down again slowly in the armchair, prompting a flickering raise of Bruce's eyebrows as he continued to tease the cherry.  "Are you not going to ravish me now, scoundrel?"

"Maybe I feel like making you wait a little longer," said Clark.

Bruce extracted the fruit from the chocolate and swallowed, then licked his lips slowly.  "You're not brave enough to do the heinous deed," he scoffed, his eyes slightly taunting.

It was all in jest, yet Clark felt some part of him tighten at the jibe.  "I fully intend, you spoiled brat, to pin you down on that bed and fuck you senseless."  Bruce's eyes glinted and Clark found himself unable to stop.  "You'll find out just how helpless you are against me when I take what I want from you and plunder that sweet body of yours until you beg me for mercy.  No matter how hard you fight, there is no way you can stop me."  He was breathing heavily now, and the color in Bruce's cheeks was very sharp--not a blush, but the dark red flush of arousal.  "I am going to fuck you so hard.  I want you to know it's coming, and make you wait for it, until your treacherous body is begging for it--it is, isn't it, Mr. Wayne?"  Bruce bit his lip, his eyes bright.  "You're sitting there in your silk getting hard, thinking about how it's going to feel when I force you wide open and fuck you."

Bruce made a small sound in his throat and twisted his body against the silk sheets without seeming to realize it.  "No," he said.

"Oh, yes," said Clark.  "Look at you.  Your eyes, your body.  You want it so bad.  You're wondering how much I'm going to hurt you.  And you're wondering how much you're going to like it."  He dropped his voice.  "You're afraid you're going to like it a lot."

"Ah," breathed Bruce, his eyes sliding half-closed.  "Just...just do it and get it over with."  His hands kneaded the silk sheets aimlessly as he took a jerky breath, then curved around his erection, pulling the red silk taut against it.

"Don't touch yourself," Clark said sharply, and Bruce groaned.  "No one gets to touch you but me now."

"You're not touching me, you bastard," moaned Bruce, but his hands shifted away.

"You're going to fight me," said Clark.  "But it won't do any good.  That's why Matches hired me, you know.  Because he knew he had taught me an very important lesson."

"What?"  Bruce breathed, almost reluctantly.

"He taught me that there is a certain pleasure to being forced to do what you want to do.  To fighting it every step of the way and being forced to submit and enjoy it."  Clark stood up then, undoing his belt, pulling his sweater over his head until he stood naked and erect at the foot of the bed.  "Like you're going to enjoy this."

"No," Bruce said.  "No."  And then Clark was on him, pinning him onto the bed, hands on his shoulders, one leg heavy across Bruce's thighs, holding him down.  Bruce gasped and convulsed against him, but without Kryptonite Clark was an immovable object, a force stronger than nature itself, crushing him gently onto the bed, as gently as velvet, irresistibly.

Bruce broke against him like a wave, a desperate surge of motion, and Clark kissed his neck as he struggled, nipping gently.  Bruce pummelled him, but his blows were those of an untrained playboy, wild and unfocused.  They rained on Clark's face and chest like frantic beats from butterfly wings.  There was a liquid tearing noise as Bruce's hand caught in one of the black silk draperies, and black silk fell down around them, draping across Clark's back like nightfall all around them.  "You're beautiful when you fight," Clark said, hearing his voice break, meaning it on every level, and kissed him.

Bruce bit his tongue as it entered his mouth, bit hard enough it would have drawn blood from anyone else, but Clark merely laughed into his mouth, exploring the soft slickness of it, the tender ridges on the roof.  There was a taste of dark chocolate and sweet cherries and the soft burn of liqueur, and Bruce bit and moaned in an ecstasy of vain resistance, his body twisting and thrusting against Clark's.  He grabbed a pillow and tried to cover Clark's face with it, pushing;  Clark grabbed it away and feathers filled the air now, drifting like stars or snow, sticking to Bruce's sweat-damp skin.

"Nn," Bruce said, "Let me go."  His eyes were wild, transported, his breath hitching in his throat.  "I'm rich, I can give you anything you want."

"Oh, you are so right," Clark chuckled.  "And you're going to."  With a quick motion, he flipped Bruce over on to his stomach and re-pinned him.  Pulling open the nightstand with one hand, he pulled out the bottle of lube x-ray vision had revealed there.  "Did you think I wouldn't find this, Mr. Wayne?  Did you think I wouldn't be brave enough to use it on you?"  Pressed against Bruce's bare flanks, he pushed against the backs of Bruce's thighs, letting him feel heat and hardness.

Bruce bucked against him as well as he could while held nearly immobile, making muffled cursing noises.  "You should be relieved I'm going to use this at all," Clark noted idly, then slipped a slick finger into Bruce's body, not too gently. 

It was hot, hot and tight and oddly silky--Clark hadn't been sure what he had expected, but the soft, yielding tightness made him bite back a moan of surprise and rising anticipation.  "No, no, no," Bruce was saying over and over.  Clark added another finger, plunging deeper, and Bruce's protests sharpened and then shattered:  "No, no--yes--no, please no--"  then much more lowly, "--don't stop..."

Clark didn't stop.  "I'm...Oh.  Oh my God," he whispered, struck with the enormity of it, the vulnerability.  Bruce just moaned and tossed his head against the undamaged pillow, feathers starring his dark hair.  "I can make you--make you feel--"  He wasn't sure what he meant anymore; he crooked his fingers and Bruce gasped sharply, going rigid.  "Can make you scream."  He couldn't wait any longer.

Bruce moved against him as Clark entered him, pushing sharply against him, refusing to let Clark go slowly.  "Make me scream," Bruce muttered.  "Yes."

"My name, " Clark agreed, keeping his movements steady, inexorable.  "I want to hear it."

"I don't--"  Bruce broke off into a groan, continued:  "I don't know your name.  I don't know...  Tell me your--Tell me--"

He wanted to tell Bruce, he really did, but there seemed to be nothing left of him but the sensation of heat and pressure, building past all endurance.  He couldn't seem to remember his own name--which one, there were too many choices, they all fled his mind like a cascade of feathers, like ripped cloth, there was nothing but the need to move harder and make Bruce make that sound again, he was lost.

"Clark," gasped Bruce, a sharp inhalation:  "Clark."  And then he screamed it, over and over, and Clark was lost in a different way, they were lost together.

When Clark could think again, he found himself with Bruce tucked up against him, head buried in the crook of Clark's neck.  Bruce was breathing heavily, long, almost moaning breaths.  They lay in silence, gathering the pieces of themselves up.

"You know what I'd like?"  Bruce's voice was small against Clark's skin.  "I'd like to be with my best friend in the world.  I'd like him to come by and see if I'm okay, and I'd make him a cup of coffee and we'd talk all night."  Clark could feel Bruce's lips moving against his shoulder.  "And I'd want to tell him how much he means to me, how precious he is, but I know he already knows.  So maybe I'd just kiss him instead."  He exhaled, a small puff of air, not quite a sigh.  "My best friend in the world."

Clark gently disentangled himself from Bruce's body, damp and relaxed.  "You've been fun, Mr. Wayne, but I do have to get going," he said softly.  "Mr. Malone wouldn't want me to spoil you."

Bruce pulled the sheets over his body as Clark got dressed, watching him intently.  "You'd do anything that horrible little man told you to, wouldn't you?" he asked.

Clark leaned over the bed and kissed his shoulder.  "He owns me, body and soul."

Bruce stretched like a lazy cat.  "But who owns your heart, my handsome ravisher?"

Clark turned at the door and smiled.  "My best friend in the world, of course."

Ten minutes later Clark Kent--wearing his glasses and a baby-blue cardigan sweater--knocked on the front door of Wayne Manor.  Bruce opened the door wearing a Gotham Knights sweatshirt and sweatpants, his feet bare.  His lips were a bit swollen and there was a small rosy bite mark on the side of his neck.  "Clark," he said.  "I was just thinking about you."

"I couldn't sleep," said Clark.  "Thought you might like some company."

Bruce smiled.  "Come on in, I'll put on some coffee."  He turned away to pad across the marble floor and Clark could see a downy feather still caught in his hair.

"I hope I didn't wake anyone up," said Clark as Bruce puttered around the kitchen.

"Everyone's out for the night," Bruce said.  He looked back over his shoulder as he reached for a couple of mugs.  "It's just you and me now."

They sat and talked--about the monitors Batman had fixed at the Watchtower, about Clark's latest story assignment, about Bruce's latest modifications to the Batmobile.  There were crickets singing outside the kitchen window.  Bruce took a long breath.  "Clark," he said.  "I have to tell you--"

"--I know," said Clark.  "I do know."  There was a long silence.  "You're supposed to kiss me now," Clark said, smiling.

"I want to tell you anyway.  I don't want you to think I'm not serious.  I play games, but they're...serious games.  And under it all, every person I am...belongs to you."

"I know," said Clark.  "But thank you for saying it."  He didn't say the same was true for him; the World's Greatest Detective was always impatient when people stated the obvious. 

Bruce leaned forward and kissed him, a slow, almost awkward kiss.

His mouth still tasted of chocolate and cherries and liqueur:  dark and sweet and intoxicating.

[identity profile] brancher.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
OK I clicked on my flist with this ACTUAL THOUGHT: "God I wish someone would post something nice and long and juicy. Oh well, maybe I will go read some of mithen's stuff I haven't gotten to yet."

AND THIS.

THIS.

AGHHHH

ILU

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
"Nice and long and juicy," oddly enough, is how Bruce described...

Uh, never mind. *blushes*

Glad you liked it!

(Anonymous) 2009-04-08 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
That is so wrong and naughty too (in a good sort of way). I'm glad I knew they were play acting...

I really love the scene at the end BTW. Lastly, LOL with the Flash too (with the understandable attitude towards Bruce).

Angeloz

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
That is so wrong and naughty too (in a good sort of way). I'm glad I knew they were play acting...

I went back over this with a fine-toothed comb a few times, worried that it might not be clear enough Bruce was into it. It would go ice-cold for me if it weren't clear...

And all the role-playing kind of made the scene at the end imperative. Bruce in a sweatshirt, sleepy and rumpled and just chatting with Clark, made me happy to write. :)

[identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
My head's pounding like it's going to crack open, but I couldn't resist reading this tonight -- heaven knows I'd have been in deep if I'd read that at work tomorrow. LOL!

This is SO the best kind of identity porn. hee! But, damn...it's probably because my head hurts so much (or something) I was totally crying by the end of it. Gah. The ending was sweet, and there's so much vulnerability there and... awww! *sniffles more* (and I'm suddenly almost glad I have a migraine to blame the tears on - I look a mess. *lol*)
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[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2009-04-08 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
*hugs you*

*migraine sympathizer*

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[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2009-04-08 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Whew! *fans self*

I'm nearly speechless! ;)

Great descriptions:

He bit a hole in the dark chocolate and slowly lapped up the oozing liqueur, keeping one eye on Clark. His tongue darted into the chocolate, rolling the cherry around inside its shell, prodding at its sweetness.

There was a liquid tearing noise as Bruce's hand caught in one of the black silk draperies, and black silk fell down around them, draping across Clark's back like nightfall all around them. "You're beautiful when you fight," Clark said, hearing his voice break, meaning it on every level, and kissed him.


Bruce just moaned and tossed his head against the undamaged pillow, feathers starring his dark hair.

These boys and their games! ;)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
Feathers! Hee, the feathers undid me, somehow. And the chocolate-covered cherry Bruce was molesting. Lucky, lucky candy...

Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] felonazcorp.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
Nnnnnngh. Identity porn is best porn. o.O X3...

Also, n'awwww at the ending! :D

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, Bruce insisted on collapsing into fluff at the end. Who am I to say him nay after he's been so obliging with the porn? :)

[identity profile] snake-easing.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
I could read all day about superheroes unknowingly insulting each others' secret identities. Flash will follow up his opinions on Bruce Wayne with a long monologue about this uptight Diana Prince he met the other day and then this reporter who couldn't tie his shoelaces without a diagram and someone to give him permission.

Identity porn is always nice in all senses of the words.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:28 am (UTC)(link)
That opening scene turned out to be my favorite, lol. Just...Batman standing there listening to Wally yammer on makes me unspeakably happy. I imagine Wally deciding to make a "Greatest Hits of Bruce Wayne" and showing it to the whole JLA to whoops of laughter...only to have a very stomach-churning moment in "Starcrossed" when Batman outs himself. :)
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[personal profile] senmut 2009-04-08 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
PURRRRRRRRRRR!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
*grin* Thanks!

[identity profile] ladyivy.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
OMG this is just a beautiful hot story to wrap this series up with.

Fantastic. Sure to give me lovely dreams as I head off to bed.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I had fun writing it, most certainly. :)

[identity profile] cmer.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
LOL, I totally adored Wally insulting the playboy billionaire with Batman in the room. Poor Bruce. <3

Beautifully written, as always, especially your carefully crafted palpable details. My heart lept at the exact same moment Bruce's heart lept when he knew he was being watched. :)

Also, this very sexy fic was exactly what I needed after a long, difficult day. I definitely needed some porn but getting your next installment of THIS identity porn was my highlight of my day. Thanks, Jen. *hugs*

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
LOL, I totally adored Wally insulting the playboy billionaire with Batman in the room. Poor Bruce. <3

That scene cracked me up so much. Man, when he finds out Bruce is Batman he's going to be soooooo embarrassed...

I'm glad I could make the end of the day a better for you, Tina! *hugs back*

[identity profile] lilacs-roses.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't even finished this yet and... Gods above and below!! ROFL at ... well... don't wanna spoil it for anyone. I'm sure you know where I'm laughing though :))))

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
I got a lot of laughs out of this story...mostly at Wally's expense, the poor guy, but Bruce startled some shocked giggles out of me as well, the crazy man... :)

[identity profile] phyrry.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my gosh, I think this is the best one of them all. Sweet and intoxicating, just like those cherries; and at last, at last, Bruce comes flat out and says it. I know they both know it, but it's not quite real til it's said. You know?

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
I know they both know it, but it's not quite real til it's said. You know?

Oh, definitely. A lot of the fun and the challenge of writing this pairing for me is that they're both so good at not saying things and not needing them said, but it's so satisfying when they finally nerve themselves up to actually manage to get it out. :)

Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] lilacs-roses.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely wonderfully done!! /huggs

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you! I had a lot of fun with it. :)

[identity profile] hitokaji.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Awww--- what a sweet ending! Love it.
And now I have a thing for Bruce Wayne dating Batman!!
It's all your fault ( oh,wait, it's Wally's fault. )
Might have to do something about this or else it won't go away. XD

Thank you for sharing! Jen-san! ^__^

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
And now I have a thing for Bruce Wayne dating Batman!!

*grin* I love the idea of Wally deciding it's a running gag that Batman is dating Bruce Wayne and teasing him about it constantly. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed! The ending made me very happy to get to. :)

[identity profile] tyriangalley.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness, this is wonderful. It might be my favorite of the lot! Bruce is just -- a bit twisted and silly and dear and -- augh, I can't describe it that well, but I love it so much. :D

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I think "twisted and silly and dear" is one of the better strings of adjectives I've ever seen applied to Bruce Wayne. :D I love it! Thanks so much for reading and your comment... :)

[identity profile] harmless-one.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
"I think he'd love to be driven into screaming his lover's name as he got fucked."

I think this about when my brain turned into mush. Thanks!

I loved Batman and Superman *flirting* way more than I should considering there was all this kinky sex after. But, somehow, the scene on the Watchtower was my favorite part of the fic. I think it's because it fit so well with the earlier parts of the story. It was like the Superman/Batman icing on the cake: These two dance around each other in all their different personalities through all four parts, and then finally meet back somewhere in the middle at the very end.

They sat and talked--about the monitors Batman had fixed at the Watchtower, about Clark's latest story assignment, about Bruce's latest modifications to the Batmobile.

This line was such a great way to show that they were finally all squished back together, everybody that they were supposed to be and happy together and just...awwwww!

I had this hallucination that you wrote that this was the last installment of this fic. Luckily, it was just a hallucination and there's more on the way. Whew! Thank god it was just a hallucination caused by wasabi peas. Tricky little hallucination inducing peas.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 11:26 am (UTC)(link)
I loved Batman and Superman *flirting* way more than I should considering there was all this kinky sex after. But, somehow, the scene on the Watchtower was my favorite part of the fic.

You know, I hadn't consciously realized that the chapter starts with them as Superman and Batman and ends with them as Clark and Bruce! *blinks* It makes for a pleasing symmetry... (and I really like "squished back together" as a description of the end, lol! Sometimes it does take some squishing...)

We'll see if Matches decides he wants to have more fun--or if Superman does, for that matter. *grin*

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[personal profile] dizmo 2009-04-08 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
fckljedklmdfikhjefkjwsenglsjdf!!!

... Um. I'm trying to manage something with any degree of coherence, but that up there is pretty much what my brain is offering at the moment.


Just. Wow. That's... ALL of it. From Wally, to the whole build up and oh my God Clark's dirty talk, and the hot hot hot, and then the aftermath which was just so adorable and n'yaaaaaaaay.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark and/or Bruce talking dirty is an unbearable kink of mine...eeee, the idea of Superman using that language in bed makes me all prickly, lol.

And oh, I love the context-free icon! Whoo!

[identity profile] genclay.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
Firstly, thank you for making the people on the train this morning think i'm mad:P I was giggling at the beging so much. I can see a fic based only on Vicky Vales interviews. For some reason I do not know why my favrote immage in the whole thing is the Lavender sweeter (a sweater is a jumper, right?)

Secondly, Hot masterful clark is the win. *fans self* Mroooowwww!

hermm... this has really left me thinking about how the post 'Starcrossed' Wally-Bruce conversation would go.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I can see a fic based only on Vicky Vales interviews. For some reason I do not know why my favrote immage in the whole thing is the Lavender sweeter (a sweater is a jumper, right?)

Indeed, a sweater is a British jumper. In American English a jumper is like...baby clothes, lol. :D I have to admit I came to writing this story for the porn and stayed for the lulz of Wally just constantly sticking his foot in it without knowing it. Oh man.

hermm... this has really left me thinking about how the post 'Starcrossed' Wally-Bruce conversation would go.

I would love to see it if you got inspired to write it. :) I can imagine quite a few ways it would go myself... most of them involve Batman saying nothing at all. :)

[identity profile] ficcyomens.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
I've been reading your epic, awesome, adorable...just all around win stories for a week or two now, and it figures that the one to make me bite the bullet and review is nommy identity porn! And toonverse, too!!

Well, besides the hot, and there was lots of hot, seriously, omg, I really, really loved the beginning with Wally! I love it when someone insults the secret identity in their presence, and he used my new favorite word, himbo! Seriously, it was such a great start and then it segued into...pantsmelting and such a fluffy awesome ending, too!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for first comments! *dances* And awesome Kermit icons, OMG! He's just lounging around, I love it.

And I have to admit the scene with Wally in the beginning really caught fire for me, I didn't even intend it to! I was going to have there be a sequence where Batman gives Superman a safeword, but then the smut went in such a way they didn't need one, and Wally decided to step up and deliver judgment on Bruce Wayne, Himbo (I love that word too, lol). Wally (especially toonverse) is my go-to guy for unwitting social awkwardness. :)

Glad you liked it and thanks so much for commenting!

[identity profile] lee-ashburn.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Woah! You really made my day with this awesome story! Guh..think my brain melted away, but dang, it was so worth it :)

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
Hehehe, thanks so much! I had a lot of fun with it. :)
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[personal profile] northernwalker 2009-04-08 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
This story makes me feel like writing again!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Really? *looks hopeful* :D

[identity profile] meteor-seven.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like this insanely game they played!
Delicious like chocolate and cherries. Yum. :P

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
I had fun writing them! They tend to really enjoy the identity games... :)
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[personal profile] zellieh 2009-04-08 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
"The back door was unlocked, as Matches had promised it would be. Clark slipped inside. There was a heartbeat on the third floor, Bruce's bedroom. It skipped, stuttered at the sound of the door opening two floors below, then evened out into a slightly-faster-than-normal pace." - I love the way that Clark's listening to Bruce's heartbeat, Bruce knows Clark's there, and this is foreplay for both of them. Such perfect characterisation. Also, Clark doesn't break in, Bruce leaves the door open for him; there's just something about that, about how well Bruce knows Clark and how much he trusts him, that he leaves the door open for him.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
I love the way that Clark's listening to Bruce's heartbeat, Bruce knows Clark's there, and this is foreplay for both of them.

It was both fun and a challenge to write the scene so it was clear Bruce was very much in on the game...he's such a good bluffer, lol. Glad you liked the moments where the implicit trust comes through...they were my favorites as well.

more, please?

[identity profile] sevais.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it!

Somewhere, Barry Allen flinches every time Wally opens his mouth, I reckon. Especially around Bruce & Clark.

On the other hand, he sure gives Clark a lot of idiotic zingers to use on Bruce so I supposed he's not entirely useless. "Himbo" indeed.

More, please?

Re: more, please?

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 06:05 am (UTC)(link)
Somewhere, Barry Allen flinches every time Wally opens his mouth, I reckon. Especially around Bruce & Clark.

*grin* I do love Wally's ability to be innocently rude! Not that he's wrong about Brucie's persona, either, lol...

We'll see if Superman feels like being kinky and getting revenge on the evil Matches sometime... :)

wally

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[identity profile] brushed-velvet.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 07:28 pm (UTC)(link)
every person I am...belongs to you

Awwwwww!

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
*grin* Thank you! All identity porn leads to that line, I suspect...

[identity profile] batfan-sarah.livejournal.com 2009-04-08 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies*

GUUUUUUHHHH!

Oh, the identity porn and the love and the lust and the hot and the hot and the hot!!!!!!!

i love you so much, jen. this just totally made my day. i've been looking forward to the end of this series and....wow. absolutely delicious :D

*hugs*

i'm gonna go grab a mop now so I can clean my brain off the floor.

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2009-04-09 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks! *blushes* I'm glad you think it was worth the wait!

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