ext_81356 ([identity profile] elenorasweet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mithen 2008-12-05 04:28 pm (UTC)

*grin up to my ears* That was so cute, it's ridiculous. That Bruce has to be lasso'd to admit it to himself it just so... cute?

"Bruce's hands fastened securely by gleaming gold, stretched across the bed." <- That sentence strikes me as odd, like it can't tell if it's Bruce, the hands or the gleaming gold that's stretched across the bed. Yanno? Maybe it's just me?

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