I enjoyed seeing how everyone fit. Your description of Dick was perfect, and I'm so glad he was in that scene. It also pleases me that he's Galahad, the Knight destined to be even greater than Lancelot himself.
But the tide of history repeating itself hurt in the battle, and yet the results were happy in the end.
So many people back! Oh, that's wonderful, Jen! For once, something like this doesn't create more loss, but gain.
That scene with Bruce removing Clark's boots...so well done! Yes, Clark is his 'liege', and forevermore shall be! :)
I suppose this is a one-shot, but have you considered mayhaps writing some scenes of life in Camelot, of Tim and Kon, of the three Robins, of Ralph and Sue, of the King, Queen, and their beloved Lancelot before the Grail?
Sorry, I just couldn't resist asking! This is already one of my favorites of yours! :)
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I enjoyed seeing how everyone fit. Your description of Dick was perfect, and I'm so glad he was in that scene. It also pleases me that he's Galahad, the Knight destined to be even greater than Lancelot himself.
But the tide of history repeating itself hurt in the battle, and yet the results were happy in the end.
So many people back! Oh, that's wonderful, Jen! For once, something like this doesn't create more loss, but gain.
That scene with Bruce removing Clark's boots...so well done! Yes, Clark is his 'liege', and forevermore shall be! :)
I suppose this is a one-shot, but have you considered mayhaps writing some scenes of life in Camelot, of Tim and Kon, of the three Robins, of Ralph and Sue, of the King, Queen, and their beloved Lancelot before the Grail?
Sorry, I just couldn't resist asking! This is already one of my favorites of yours! :)